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When Everything Changed - VIII
Dec 17, 2012 11:38
Fandom: Naruto (
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character: kakashi
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character: sakura
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goldfishlover73
December 17 2012, 23:20:55 UTC
Oh Yay! I love this new chapter.
There was one thing I saw that bothered me though.
" What if held a conversation with her? "
It's missing a pronoun I think.
But I got the jist of it.
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autumn_glory
December 19 2012, 14:49:26 UTC
Thank you :)
Ooh! I missed that one. Thank you for pointing it out. And I'm happy that you liked it
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There was one thing I saw that bothered me though.
" What if held a conversation with her? "
It's missing a pronoun I think.
But I got the jist of it.
Reply
Ooh! I missed that one. Thank you for pointing it out. And I'm happy that you liked it
Reply
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