FIc: Fit to Print - Part 4 (NOT THE END)

[auselysium]

Title: Fit to Print
Fandom: HP
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Ginny bashing, but only by Draco. WIP
Summary: A story in which Draco falls madly in love (but with a straight, heartbroken boy), Harry is said straight, heartbroken boy (but you know, shit happens). A tale of friendship, love, Gryffindor determination and all the news that is

Comments

[a_execution]

Yay, more! Short, but I'm excited to see what's next.

(P.S. You may want to consider investing in a beta. Not trying to be bitchy or anything, but I did notice a few typos and diction errors in there.)

[auselysium]

I've tried to fix the typos. Also not to be bitchy but diction means how you pronounce a word so I don't think I had any errors with that.

[a_execution]

Actually, the original meaning of diction is a writer's or speaker's vocabulary choices, and you had a couple instances where you misused words.

[auselysium]

Care to point those out?

[maunetjeret]

Firstly, hope your son is better soon.
Secondly, that article was truly brilliant! I so can't wait for the next update...

[auselysium]

Thank you!! It's tough to watch him be so unhappy when he is usually such a cheerful kid!!

I'm so glad you liked the article. I hadn't planned on writing it out actually but I'm glad I did!

Thanks for commenting!

[dm999]

Ahhhh what a beautiful chapter. And how Draco uses the article is genius.

[auselysium]

He's a smart one that Draco!! So glad you enjoyed the mini-update!!

[blueboyfey]

Oh, love this! Can't wait for the next bit. Hope your son is feeling better!

[auselysium]

Thanks! My little guy is slowly getting there. Of course now my husband and I are both sick!! Next part will be posted tomorrow!!

[moxie574]

I have really enjoyed this!

[auselysium]

I'm so glad! Thank you for all your comments!!