Comments | auryn_wren: Happy Birthday Atsugari8

auryn_wren

Happy Birthday Atsugari8

Dec 07, 2009 19:27

So, it's atsugari8-chan's birthday, and I told her I'd try to write her fic, and OMG, I actually managed it!

Also, it's my first published RPS fic, so I hope it's not too bad

So, Atsu-chan, have fic...

Title: The Game ( Read more... )

fic, j3, birthday present

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ekaanta December 7 2009, 10:29:39 UTC

Shoulda known it would take at-chan to draw you out. :D Great come back!

auryn_wren December 7 2009, 10:54:37 UTC

I've been trying! I promise! (actually, I have another 3 finished ones, but since they're xmas presents, I have to wait until after xmas to share.... do you want one? ^_^ )

ekaanta December 11 2009, 07:01:35 UTC

Huh, are you offering? 'Cause that 'd be too nice to pass! :d

auryn_wren December 11 2009, 10:09:54 UTC

I'm offering... ^_^ Just choose from one of my fandoms and give me a kink or something, and I'll do my best ^_^

I do Spn (bottom!sam), RPS (bottom!Jared), Merlin (bottom!Merlin), Narnia (bottom!Edmund) or Charmed (bottom!Chris)

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ash48 December 7 2009, 12:17:06 UTC

Very nice! Very nice indeed :D

Love the last line particularly. :)

auryn_wren December 8 2009, 07:56:21 UTC

Thank you ^_^

I'm glad you loved the last line It's probably my favourite too.

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auryn_wren December 8 2009, 07:52:06 UTC

Hee! Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed your birthday present!

Yes, Jared is getting exactly what he wants, which is always good.

glimmerella December 7 2009, 23:04:54 UTC

I think we need some examples of The Game now, you tease.

auryn_wren December 8 2009, 00:27:53 UTC

You mean like this....?

Jared lay on the bed, surrounded by complete darkness. He was naked and blindfolded, but not bound down. He knew the layout of the room well enough that if he wanted to leave, he could. But he didn't want to leave, he'd never want to leave.

Somewhere in the room were Jared's lovers, Jensen and Jeff, prowling around, watching him, and it made him hard - harder. He was tense, waiting for the first touch, anticipating it, wanting it. And then it came.

The first hand to touch him was Jeff's. Slightly larger than Jensen's and rougher, more callouses. It settled on Jared's inner thigh and stroked the soft skin there. Jared arched into the touch. The gentle touch feathered over to Jared's other thigh, barely touching his cock, and Jared whined, deep in his throat. The chuckles of the other men did nothing to soothe his hunger for moreA soft touch of lips pressed against the underside of his cock had Jared arching again. Then the face nuzzled against him, the scruffy beard of his tormentor teasing him ( ... )

lighthousefae December 8 2009, 02:46:30 UTC

Sooooo....who won? :D

Nice, very nice....

Love,
Kally

auryn_wren December 8 2009, 03:36:50 UTC

Why, Jared won, of course ^_^

Thanks for commenting.