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aurorawest

Fic: The List (3/5)

Mar 02, 2007 14:35

This is for skinny_bacon, during her long work day. :)

Title: The List (3/5)
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: PG
Summary: Hermione wasn't sure what had gone wrong in her life. A George/Hermione story.
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: Obviously "Harry Potter" isn't mine.

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( For the next couple weeks, Hermione went about the business of life rather dully. )

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Comments 3

skinny_bacon March 2 2007, 18:28:54 UTC

Ack! How am I supposed to have a good work day after that ending? Argh, I need to know what happens!!! This was brilliant, by the way. Completely brilliant. I am hopelessly enthralled by this relationship that you have going here (it is going, right? This mysterious kissing woman won't interfere too much, will she???). And the writing was wonderful. I particularily liked this bit:

“You look very thoughtful,” he said, amusement still glinting in his eyes.
“I’m told I look that way quite frequently,” she responded, reddening a little.

Completely in character, completely perfect to imagine. Thank you SO much for brightening my lunch break!!!

aurorawest March 3 2007, 20:00:53 UTC

Yay, I'm glad that it brightened your lunch break! :)

The relationship is going, never fear. The fun is in dragging it out as long as possible, though! ;)

dawnintheforest March 9 2008, 03:40:42 UTC

This chapter was great! The ending especially of course! What a great twist! I thought that maybe Ron had arrived or that somebody was hurt or something! But of course an old ex of George (or current girlfriend?) was to arrive! Great plot twist! I'm delighted! NOT delighted that it happened to George and Hermione, or that we have no idea how this woman managed to have her tongue in George's mouth by the time Hermione finished in the loo. But delighted at the type of twist. If that makes any sense?