FIC: Last Day of Magic (where are you?)

[aurorawest]

Title: Last Day of Magic (where are you?)
Fandom: LOST
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,802
Summary:  They have to go back.  [Dan/Charlotte]
Warnings: Season 4
Disclaimer: LOST is the property of ABC.  Title from "Last Day of Magic" by The Kills.
A/N:  Written for lostsquee Season 4 Hiatus Challenge -- combination of the pictures for prompt posts 2 and 3 ( subway I

Comments

[cleuchi]

You know, it was just like WOW. I've read several of your Dan/Charlotte fics and I just love them, you know exactly how to capture their personalities. And this, this is just perfect. I've got no words.

[morlockiness]

I love that through all of it, you can tell Dan really cares for her and hates watching her be unhappy. It's sweet.

[lost_constant]

wow.

This is incredible.

I think I've mentioned it to you before that I've never been much of a Dan/Charlotte fan...but you are starting to make a believer out of me. This was really, really beautiful.

The line about them having to go back had me whispering "Wooaahh." I was reading the story as though it were a flashback...but then to realize I was in a flash forward... You just LOSTed me! :D

Thank you so much for all of your magnificent stories.

[wooedandwon]

I have to agree with lost_constant. I was going to say much the same thing, but apparently she's already done all the work ;) (Though I was reading it as a flashforward)

I also don't much care for Darlotte (or whatever that ship is called), but this was very cleverly done--very minimalistic and edgy. I liked it a lot. I was breathless.

[lady_boromir]

That was so intense and so incredibly well-written. Wow, that just, I'm speechless! You captured the whole overall mood of both of their despair so well, and it was really interesting to see what life for them off the Island would be like. Such a very creative concept. Suffice to say, I loved all of it! You write Dan/Charlotte so well!

[kat_scratches]

This was bloody heartbreaking in place, did you know that? I'm not so much a Charlotte fan, but your stories have such a way of coaxing me into liking her! This was ... wow, just wow.