Fic: The Freest Man

[aurorawest]

Title:  The Freest Man
Fandom:  LOST
Rating:  PG-13
Word Count:  1,815
Summary:  Everyone hopes for a happy ending.  [Ben, Juliet]
Warnings:  Even though I started writing it prior to 4.03, I would now warn you that there are 4.03 spoilers.  Rating for cussin'.
Disclaimer:  "LOST" is the property of ABC.
A/N:  Written for lostfichallenge #65 - Free for All.

x-posted to henrygalelovers,

Comments

[crazymaryt]

Wow! I really loved this piece. I felt it was as tension filled in the words as it is between them on screen. Wonderful story.

Sometimes he felt that appearances were all he had left.

What a fitting line for Ben. I loved it.

[aurorawest]

Thanks! :)

[jade_melody]

Wow this was lovely!
The mood and tension and words fit so perfectly - and place it perfectly with the flashforward meeting between Jack and Kate.

Definitely worthy of the show! I could feeeel the sparks flying between them! :)

[aurorawest]

Thank you so much! I love the FFs, everyone is so messed up, lol.

[aurorawest]

*big hug*

Thank you!!! You know, every time I write something, you're the person I want to impress, because I aspire to write Lost fanfiction as well as you do. I'm so happy you liked this!

[mrslinus17]

Ong. It is impossible to explain how much I loved this. Its loved the line about dancing, and the ending. And everything else =].

Thank you!

*fingers crossed for more Ben/Juliet action on Lost*

[aurorawest]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[failoh]

Good story,and I really liked the way you wrote Juliet and Ben. You have a great grasp on both of them, and (even though I despise Ben, terribly), I felt for him in this. You give him the chance of a heart and hope, and I really liked this. Good job, good story!

[aurorawest]

Thank you! It's great to hear that even though you hate the character, I managed to inspire a little sympathy. :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting!