Fic: Firsts

[aurorawest]

Title:  Firsts
Fandom:  LOST
Rating:  R
Summary:  The sheets get twisted around them right away, and they have to pause, laughing, to untangle themselves, first from each other, then from the bedclothes.  Oneshot.  [Mikhail/Bea]
Spoilers:  Season 3 characters and concepts
Disclaimer:  I have absolutely no rights to LOST.

x-posted to mikhail_lives

Comments

[that_evening]

*gasp* So wonderful! You wrote both characters very well, and the love scenes were great!

[aurorawest]

Thanks! :)

[keyserzozie]

Oh, lovely! Perfect characterization, gorgeous writing, and just enough detail to hit sensuality without going all Cheshill Beach... (I very much like the way you've handled the problem of Milkhail's age. He needs to feel young. that's it precisely). Terrific.

[aurorawest]

Thank you! :)

[skinny_bacon]

Wow! This was hot and beautiful and all sorts of amazing. Excellent work!

[aurorawest]

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! Also, as you know, I don't generally write anything beyond a PG-13 rating, so it makes me very happy to hear that you thought it was hot. :)

[aurorawest]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Finding fanfiction about Mikhail/Bea is extremely difficult. It's one of those ships that there are only about three people writing for.

And your English isn't horrible at all! :) It's quite good!

[withrus]

beautiful. Hope you continue with this ship...

[aurorawest]

Thanks! I definitely will; I love it. :)