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Fic: Sisters

May 30, 2007 19:52

Title: Sisters
Fandom: LOST
Rating: PG
Summary: Rachel has always been there for Juliet. Oneshot. [Juliet]
Spoilers: 3.07
Disclaimer: I have absolutely no rights to LOST.
A/N: Written for lostfichallenge Challenge #47: We are Family.

( Juliet pressed the tissue into her face and shuddered )

lost:juliet, lost:rachel, fanfiction:lost, lostfichallenge, lost

Comments 10

kawaiispinel May 30 2007, 19:15:12 UTC

Beautiful! ^_^ It felt so real it was almost like reading a flashback scene from an episode. I could just see something like this happening between them.

aurorawest May 30 2007, 20:25:38 UTC

Thank you! :)

morlockiness May 30 2007, 23:36:16 UTC

Oh, that was so sweet! I loved it and it works so nicely.

aurorawest May 31 2007, 13:09:00 UTC

Thank you! :)

jade_melody May 31 2007, 01:03:26 UTC

I completely agree with kawaiispinel. It felt just like a real flashback! <3

aurorawest May 31 2007, 13:09:27 UTC

Thank you! :)

allibabab May 31 2007, 03:24:22 UTC

This is really well done.

Juliet had cried and cried in bed, waiting for him to come to his senses, to be kind, to be the man she’d fallen in love with.

I love the way you phrased this -- I could just feel the hurt and abandonment she felt, even before he actually left. Great job!

aurorawest May 31 2007, 13:10:23 UTC

Thank you! :)

anonymous June 1 2007, 10:10:05 UTC

Very nice indeed! We need more of Juliet's inner workings right now - she's in such danger of becoming another Jack satellite....

aurorawest June 2 2007, 10:22:49 UTC

Thanks! Yes, she is in danger of becoming a Jack satellite. I miss my awesome Juliet.