Fiction: Deduce Me, Love

Jan 05, 2012 11:57


Title: Deduce Me, Love

Rating: PG

Pairings: John/Sherlock

Warnings: None

Word Count: 221

Summary: A story written in the 221b format, 221 words, last word beginning with "b". Sherlock likes deducing John and John enjoys being the object of Sherlock's deductions.
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john watson, rating: pg, slash, sherlock holmes, bbc sherlock, pairing: john/sherlock, romance

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aurora_boreali January 6 2012, 03:42:42 UTC
Thank you! It's such a common theme in lots of John/Sherlock ficts, but it was fun to take my stab at it. Very glad you liked it.

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gleichklang January 10 2012, 00:10:26 UTC
Wow, I'm a bit shocked that you've only got one comment so far (at least on lj). Because this? It's... Well, it took my breath away. Not literally, but sometimes I get this feeling about a story, this special something that you can't really describe. It's soft and quiet, bursting with colours in this gentle, subtle way. Maybe poetic would be an appropriate term, at least that's what comes to my mind easily enough. What it boils down to is that I loved it. Really. :) I adore your mind for the pun with 'deduce' and 'seduce'. And, of course, this special line: "Deduce me, Love." For me, it's like John's feelings for Sherlock in a nutshell. It... left me breathless. :)

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aurora_boreali January 10 2012, 00:31:47 UTC
You made my evening! Cause I'm fond of this little 221b. Nice to hear that others like it, even if there's only two of you. Seen Scandal yet? The scene where Sherlock "deduces" John inspired this. Anyway, thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a wonderfully detailed and inspiring comment. If you liked this, I wrote a few others in a similar style: His Eyes Are Not Windows, His Face in the Wind, and One Hundred Days.

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