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Part One: Things Born of Fire - Chapter 4

Nov 09, 2006 19:31

Title: We Can Run Away Now They’re All Dead and Gone.
Author: Aurey09
Fandom: Buffy
Part One: Things Born of Fire.
Chapter: 4/10
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Buffy belongs to Joss Whedon, not me.
Summery: Set after 'Chosen'. The Scoobies leave town and sure enough trouble follows them.
A/N: Thanks

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fanfiction, we can run away now..., btvs, faith, spike, buffy, dawn

Comments 4

grandnester November 11 2006, 07:03:23 UTC

The character interactions continue to be the highlight of the story. Both the Buffy/Dawn and Faith/Buffy scenes were well done. I like that Buffy's disconnection from the others hasn't magically disappeared, and that she continues to struggle with it.

aurey09 November 11 2006, 10:24:03 UTC

Buffy disconnect is something I was trying to get across because it's difficult to build friendship back up and her mind set of being the Slayer is also a barrier. I'm glad you picked up on that and that you're finding the character interaction a highlight of the story.

myfeetshowit January 21 2007, 04:50:28 UTC

We are getting to see a lot of things that normally wouldn't be shown on a TV show because of the lack of time. Almost like watching the extras on a DVD. Fun.

aurey09 January 21 2007, 15:41:29 UTC

"We are getting to see a lot of things that normally wouldn't be shown on a TV show" ;-) isn't that what fanfiction is for.