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Part One: Things Born of Fire - Chapter 8

Jan 12, 2007 00:20

Title: We Can Run Away Now They’re All Dead and Gone.
Author:Aurey09
Fandom: Buffy
Part One: Things Born of Fire
Chapter: 8/10
Word Count: 1,972
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Buffy belongs to Joss Whedon, not me.
A/N: Thanks you to my beta
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fanfiction, we can run away now..., btvs, faith, andrew, willow, xander, dawn

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blueanddollsome January 12 2007, 04:27:10 UTC

Okay, that was way too short. I wanna know what happens next. Dawn and Andrew talking about getting their own team was cute.

aurey09 January 12 2007, 20:06:43 UTC

Okay, that was way too short. I think this was my second longest chapter but okay :-) I had the most fun writing the Dawn and Andrew scene.

myfeetshowit January 21 2007, 05:49:31 UTC

You do fight scenes very well, and your pacing is right on. The story is just where it should be with only two chapters to go.

Imala shaping up to be a interesting character.

aurey09 January 21 2007, 16:20:26 UTC

I was really worried about the fight and the pacing. I'm glad you like the OC character, I was trying make her vulnerable but not a damsel - she's a Slayer after all.

I wanted people to care enough about her that they wouldn't root for the demon to kill her - I know some people who rooted for Caleb to kill some of the potentials (the one with the terrible English accent in particular.)

hesadevil January 27 2007, 22:06:58 UTC

This is a great story, well plotted with characters that ring true. It's a mini-season 8 with a new OC born from the consequences of Willow's spell and with The First anything but defeated (Giles should have given Buffy a stronger warning about that).

I gave it the Spike thumbs up on chapter one and then lost track of it somehow. I think you should re-post it one chapater at a time on gen_storyteller rather than just link to it.

aurey09 January 27 2007, 22:25:54 UTC

Thanks for reading it I'm glad you liked the plot and the characters.

I'll re-post all the chapters - but how do I go about getting rid of the first post I made on there. If you could advice me what to do I'd be greatful.

hesadevil January 27 2007, 22:38:24 UTC

Go back to the entry and

click the little pencil tool (the edit tool)

scroll down to the bottom of the entry and you should see a 'delete entry' button. Just click it

tick 'yes delete' which will then appear.

If you have any problems come back to me and I can delete it for you.

hesadevil January 27 2007, 22:42:19 UTC

When you re-post the chapters, would you spead them out over a week. On the 'subject' line, specify each one after the first as Fic Update - name of Fic x/total.

I'll be on hand to help with tags. Let me know when you've deleted the original entry so that I can remove it from the author's list of entries in 'Memories' and create new ones.

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