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Jun 29, 2007 16:40

Title: A Few Ways Lassiter Might Make the First Move

Author: Auntie_Climatic

Rating: PG-13 for naughty language and boy touching

Paring: Shassie

Disclaimer: I only own my own bitterness

Notes: Every Psych story I’ve written thus fair has had Shawn making the first move, but now it’s Carlton’s turn! Tell me which first move you like the most, and I’ll ( Read more... )

psych, fic

Comments 83

toperfection June 30 2007, 00:36:33 UTC

Okay..I loved EVERYONE OF THESE ( ... )

auntie_climatic June 30 2007, 05:24:57 UTC

Hee, anyone who has been around children know the "boneless move" (tm). I think of it whenever I see Shawn struggle with Lassiter. It's very cute.

I've never had morphine per say, but I have had pain killers (after a surgery, not the black market kind). Poetry did insue.

I love Evil! Lassiter. Remember the naked men episode? With the chest hair?

I'm an angst whore as well, so I won't judge. Thank you for your detailed comment. I think it's one of the best I've gotten.

bay_bus_rider June 30 2007, 00:41:09 UTC

Very cute. Number 1 is definitely my favoriteperfect description of a struggle we've seen so often (hotel kitchen, anyone?).

One typo, albeit an impressive one: "Shawn may have frozen, but Lassiter surged foreword..." should be forwarddirection, not preface. Impressive, I say, because I have a cataloguing job in which I have to type the word "foreword," and usually end up with the other one.

auntie_climatic June 30 2007, 05:28:24 UTC

Oops! *runs off to fix error* Thank you. I actually make that mistake all the time. It's a curse.

I'm happy you thought of the hotel kitchen seen because, when I saw that episode, I was babysitting a five year old who tried that move on me earlier. I laughed for a long time that day.

nighthawkms June 30 2007, 01:30:53 UTC

Somewhere in the back of his mind, the unhigh version of Lassiter was writing his resignation and planning to move to North Carolina, where he would sell clocks.

I think that was my favorite line xD Brilliant story. A few past/present tense mixups in the first one, but other than that, awesome job. It's an interesting idea for Lassiface to start things up in these ways.

auntie_climatic June 30 2007, 05:29:46 UTC

Ha! I thought to myself, 'What would Lassiter sell? Shoes? No. Guns? Maybe. Clocks? YES!' I'm glad you enjoyed it.

tigriswolf June 30 2007, 01:50:58 UTC

I liked high!Lassiter. *hee*

auntie_climatic June 30 2007, 05:30:05 UTC

He does seem to be a popular one doesn't he?

sara_wolf June 30 2007, 02:22:20 UTC

Loved 'em all. But number three is definitely my favorite.

auntie_climatic June 30 2007, 05:30:58 UTC

Thank you! And also: Alan Rickman! *Hugs*