The Movement of the Earth -- Chapter 10

[audreyii_fic]

Title: The Movement of the Earth
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: T
Characters: Bella, Jacob, Charlie, and others (J/B)
Genre: Romance/Angst/Wolfpack!Humor
Warnings: Language, violence, and references to adult behavior

Comments

[spoonz_10]

And I'm not Stephenie Meyer, though I might go as her for Halloween.

Don't do it! You might frighten small children! (And teach them improper grammar!)

Great chapter, dear. I'm SO glad we're getting a little more insight to Emily/Sam/Leah in your version! I hated that she never explained that fully.

Why? Why did the saga not give us these things? Why do we still not know who Embry's father is? How could this fucking woman sketch out the beginnings of fucking interesting characters and then just fucking toss them aside like fucking garbage to fucking focus on a bunch of boring as shit motherfucking sparklepires?

There, there, love. I completely understand.

I heard somewhere that even Meyer didn't know who Embry's dad was. WTF kinda writer doesn't know her character's complete backstory? Isn't the rule that you should know 100%, and only tell the reader 10-20% about a character? I mean, come on. I'm pretty sure his own FATHER falls into that 10-20%, right? Fucking Meyer.

Anywho, keep up the beautiful work!

[sleepy_sheep683]

"I heard somewhere that even Meyer didn't know who Embry's dad was. "

She didn't, and as far as I know, still doesn't:

"Who is Embry's father

[stigmata_crow]

Back of the fucking line, sleepy, we've got a lot of people who want to punch her. Besides, you're British, you know how to queue (if you get that reference, I love you).

[sleepy_sheep683]

LOL- 'Hitchhikers...' for the win!

[saucydeviant]

I'm excited for Wednesday too! Another great chapter. I love how you draw out the angst. I want them to be together but at the same time, I don't want this to end! Ah! Great cap off to a long 13 hr day.

[audreyii_fic]

Ooh, happy to brighten your (horrifyingly long) day! And yeah, I'm sort of a knife-twister when it comes to the angst...

[lsjcandy]

I wanted to slap Bella for hurting Emily's feelings. Even if it was about defending Jake *who is wrong, so stop defending him*.

And I love Leah, so she is going to be there too, right? *puppy-dog eyes*

But now I'm kinda sort of really curious about what happened!!!

[audreyii_fic]

LOL. Yeah, Bella was harsh and judgmental. Can't have too much character development all at once, right? ;)

And I love Leah, so she is going to be there too, right? *puppy-dog eyes*

Yeah... no Leah this fic. Sorry 'bout that :( I've spent enough time with Leah in other fics, wanted to try something new...

What happens next will, well, happen next. *cough*

[lsjcandy]

NAHH, no Leah? Well *sighs*.. It has Jacob, soo..

[audreyii_fic]

Heh. The trick about Stepford Wives is that they have to be brainwashed into behaving that way. Emily just likes it ;) (Eh, different strokes.)

I guess it gives her some reason to write a few books on her sparklepires, just like what she did to Bree Tanner. I wouldn't be surprised if she decides to go down that road.

Please God no.

And yeah, I'm not Wonder Woman. I just don't get out much. (Missed two seasons, so far...)

[lezah_hctiw]

Okay, Audrey, one breath, in and out. Two breaths, in and out. Three. The fuzziness will start to fade. Sparklepires are in these days, werewolves come a distant second. :(

Man, its so nice to have the Leah/Sam/Emily triangle explained. Now, that makes the Sam/Emily relay a lot better.

Loved the father/daughter moment. FTW. Damn, only 6 chapters left?! I'm missing it already!

P.S. Oktoberfest! Wooohooo! *Chants "Chug Chug Chug!"*

[audreyii_fic]

Er... five chapters left. Sorry :(

Glad you find the Sam/Emily relay more understandable now. I sort of always felt like there had to be more to it if it was to be even remotely realistic... or else Emily really did sell out the sisterhood.

I could use a beer.