Awesome!! beautifully written. Loved how you started with Nikki's dream and melded it with Harrys phone call saying "Wake up woman"..Hahaahaa!!! Then moved on to awkwardness and Nikki's prompt and Harry's wit.."Maybe after work I can make your dreams come true" he giggles. You know doctor Cunningham I may just choose to hold you on that one" I said.. Harry and Nikki perfectly captured..:) Loved it.. This so needs a sequel...:)
That was exactly what I wanted with this story! Transition from the one dream to the next and then to reality and Harry's phone call. And all that in some crazy time of day like 4AM when you don't really know if things are real or you're still dreaming.
This story could've used some more time working on details but as usual I couldn't wait to publish it. But altogether I am satisfied with it considering that I am no good writing Nikki and this is completely from her perspective. And it was so fun to write! Thanks for your time reading and reviewing :)
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Then moved on to awkwardness and Nikki's prompt and Harry's wit.."Maybe after work I can make your dreams come true" he giggles.
You know doctor Cunningham I may just choose to hold you on that one" I said..
Harry and Nikki perfectly captured..:) Loved it.. This so needs a sequel...:)
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This story could've used some more time working on details but as usual I couldn't wait to publish it.
But altogether I am satisfied with it considering that I am no good writing Nikki and this is completely from her perspective.
And it was so fun to write!
Thanks for your time reading and reviewing :)
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