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audentiae

fic: avatar [aang/katara]

Oct 04, 2007 16:58

Title: Pull Me In
Author: Alisa
Rating: PG/K+
Prompt: #001, Color
Warning(s): slightly sensual?
Word Count: 143
Summary: Avatar Kyoshi's got nothin' on him.
Author's Notes: Who doesn't love Aang in make-up? ^__^

Pull Me In

The make-up was creamy under her fingers, the colors vibrant and rich against pale skin. It was a funny thing, to be putting make-up ( Read more... )

avatar: fanfiction, aang, katara, fanfiction, kataang100, kataang, avatar

Comments 8

kashalicious October 4 2007, 22:33:28 UTC

Honestly, did you have to kick so much ass?

"An explosion of colors, and all she could see was gray."

That line, in and of itself, knocked me out and THEN you hit me with that second drabble while I was still recovering. These are all amazing and original and so believable. Wonderful contribution!

audentiae October 5 2007, 00:58:22 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you like them!

Honestly, did you have to kick so much ass?

Sorry, but with Kataang, kickassery is required! ^__^

melisaku October 4 2007, 23:55:14 UTC

Holy! This was amazing! I loved, loved, loved it! The way you phrase and write everything leaves me in awe. Wonderful job. :)

audentiae October 5 2007, 00:59:26 UTC

Thanks! xD

Style is my favorite part of writing (as is pretty obvious), so I'm glad you liked it!

nanthimus October 5 2007, 04:44:33 UTC

O-Oh my God. There is so much love. And so much heart breakage.

D:

<3333

audentiae October 6 2007, 00:03:59 UTC

Thanks!

Besides:

Hot Lovin' x (Heartbreak + Love) = Kataang

PS Your icon makes me giggle. The way Zuko/Katara should be. xD

angelchan_2004 October 5 2007, 11:22:34 UTC

These were so lovely~ The first one was just so... so captivating? And then that last one! D: So sad, but very in-character and everything! <33 Can't wait to see more!

audentiae October 6 2007, 00:04:43 UTC

Thanks! Let's hope the rest are half as good! ^_^