Oh, hon. This was beautiful. Especially this final chapter written from Daniel's POV. Sheesh, look at me snivelling away here.
I could see so much of you in this as well and that's another reason why this is such a fantastic piece.
I wondered if Jack would show up in the end, but I guess that would have been a cliche. And I think it ended up being all the better for not having him miraculously reappear.
Wow, this was amazing. I sad down and read it all and cried like a baby. I would love a sequel so that Jack could meet his baby. You write so beautifully, I don't think I've read a babyfic I've enjoyed more.
wow, wonderful fic. someone said I had to read this earlier today...and now I've read all 11 parts...it kept me hooked. Really good! I hope there is a sequel where Jack gets to read this all...and he gets to meet his son:) Beautiful story! (one of the best I've read lately!)
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I could see so much of you in this as well and that's another reason why this is such a fantastic piece.
I wondered if Jack would show up in the end, but I guess that would have been a cliche. And I think it ended up being all the better for not having him miraculously reappear.
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No... no cliche. Was tempted though - I like happy endings *sigh*
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*shares cake in the mean time*
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This is such a lovely start to my holiday -I'm taking a notebook with me and hope to finish the sequel :)
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Beautiful story! (one of the best I've read lately!)
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There is a sequel and Jack is in it *eg* but it's not finished yet :)
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The writing was Beautiful, verything was beautiful.
Can't wait for the sequal
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