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lillian13 November 16 2006, 19:21:31 UTC
OMG, this was such a nice interlude. The gal-pal black market, Caldwell's reactions to Sheppard...especially McKay reciting poetry to Dex.

Teeny little edit: "misgynistic" s/b "misogynistic" ?

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auburnnothenna November 16 2006, 19:25:47 UTC
*facepalm*

Two writers, two betas and a spellchecker...Oi. The shame of it, the shame of it.

Enjoy the interlude. Next part everything goes to hell in a handbasket.

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panisdead November 16 2006, 19:47:00 UTC
Additional *facepalm*.

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lillian13 November 16 2006, 19:56:57 UTC
Hah! Don't feel bad. I'm *paid* to find these things.

And I kind of expected the handbasket. :-)

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sageness November 16 2006, 19:40:57 UTC
*blinks*

You made me LIKE Caldwell. Also, I love the insight into Weir and the Taur'i / Lantean division of loyalties. Very much looking forward to the next part. :D

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yin_again November 16 2006, 19:54:51 UTC
"Fuck, I love this place."

Me, too. I love this place so much. Lovely chapter, dears.

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fatema November 16 2006, 19:56:51 UTC
Oh Ard! What a pleasant surprise! This was absolutely wonderful! I loved Steven's POV. It was fresh and the sex change was somehow reinforced. Really loved it.

And McKay reciting poetry and kissing Ronon? Oh my! What trouble lies ahead...

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auburnnotlisa November 16 2006, 21:24:55 UTC
Early on, when we were still plotting the first bits, we turned to each other and went, You Know What Might Be Cool As An Outsider Perspective...?

McKay reciting poetry and kissing Ronon? Oh my!

Apt exclamation. *g*

Thanks!

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amothea November 16 2006, 20:01:28 UTC
I loved this new chapter. Caldwell's reactions were just perfect and I loved how he's responding to Sheppard as a woman and his insights. I also really loved the part with Ronon and Rodney.

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auburnnotlisa November 16 2006, 21:27:16 UTC
how he's responding to Sheppard as a woman and his insights

No matter how fiercely opposed all of us were when he was up against Elizabeth -- by now, especially after the chat with Woolsey on the balcony, it's pretty clear he's a decent guy (and one of the people who see more than they let on).

Glad you liked Ronon and Rodney! Bonding over poetry is tricky; Sara gave us valuable pointers.

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