Destruction Where You Stand - Chapter Sixteen

Dec 05, 2007 18:51


...I bet you weren't expecting that, were you?

Anyway, here it is.  I guess there are some benefits to disrupted travel plans after all.  Happy Hanukkah, everyone.

Chapter Sixteen: And Here Again He Lies

"Adieu, O soldier;
You of the rude campaigning, (which we shared,)
The rapid march, the life of the camp,
The hot contention of opposing ( Read more... )

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serenenuit December 5 2007, 23:52:06 UTC
Woooooo! *flees to read*

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serenenuit December 6 2007, 00:24:22 UTC
Ok. All done. I don't know if this was what you were going for, but I found it interesting that Sirius and Remus are taking the first steps to putting their world back together while Lucius is busy trying to push his vision for a new world with Moody.

Poor Remus and Sirius. *hugs*

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auberus December 6 2007, 00:27:55 UTC
That's *exactly* what I was going for. ::cackles in glee::

er. maybe i should have slept last night instead of fighting with various travel agents.

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spacefragments December 6 2007, 00:26:28 UTC
...I bet you weren't expecting that, were you?

aaaugh i've been waiting for an update since I recced you on the rs_prophet. this has made my day. :D

right now, i'm not sure if i want to read more about remus and sirius (oh poor boys, at least they can console each other without hiding anything. that was a beautiful scene) or malfoy and moody, both sections were equally interesting, though obviously in very different ways ;)

I loved how sirius thought of lily, btw, i always think that's exactly how their relationship was.

nice update! :D

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auberus December 6 2007, 00:28:36 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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auberus December 6 2007, 00:31:01 UTC
(thank you for the rec, too.) :)

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spacefragments December 6 2007, 01:03:45 UTC
you're welcome! ♥ you deserve it, in my opinion.

ps. i like the new layout. :)

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tartancravat December 6 2007, 02:27:40 UTC
Huzzah! There is much doing of jigs, and possible a waltz. That was excellent. Especially Lily, but, you know, the rest of it just as much.

You have also inspired me to write more fic, which I've been meaning to do now November's over.

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auberus December 6 2007, 03:42:30 UTC
Ooh, I'm always glad to inspire fic! (and flattered that I could!)

Thanks so much for the feedback.

::sits back to enjoy the dancing::

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forochel December 6 2007, 03:44:05 UTC
OMGOMGOMG!!

*RUNS TO READ*

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forochel December 6 2007, 03:55:31 UTC
...wow, Malfoy. That's certainly unexpected. And what will they do! When they find out that the guy cousin Narcissa was married off to is in running for Minister of Magic. Also, poor Alastor. :D

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auberus December 6 2007, 03:58:04 UTC
Yeah, Lucius is a tricky bastard. He's got all sorts of plans now that he's no longer required to play second fiddle to Lord Voldemort -- and he's not going to let slide an opportunity to get a favour out of Dumbledore.

Moody, I think, is a little out of his depth. He is first and foremost a cop, used to straight talk, whereas Lucius is a politician -- and that's a world in which the way one says something is far more important than what one says. Lucius was actually taking it pretty easy on him.

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forochel December 6 2007, 14:14:25 UTC
I still don't understand why they stand to serve a halfblood, though. I mean - once they find it out they'd jump ship, won't they? No matter how powerful Lord Voldemort is, he's still a lot weaker without his followers. PUREBLOOD PRIDE, YO!

...Right. I think I was rather out of my depth as well, there.

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