*sighs* I'm just amazed . . . all the ideas/stories/writings that come out from you . . . and I love them all! Of course, I admit to having a little bias towards DWYS (*cough - next chapter? - cough*) as my top choice . . . but this one is good, too, as are all the others . . . oh, just don't force me to prioritize or choose which of your stuff I like best - I can't do that!
More please! Is there more about? At first, I'll admit that I was a tad skeptical, but only because I've fallen out of love and even like with history (bad experiences with senior year teachers and such), but I do like this! As always, I adore your characterisations and am genuinely interested in reading the rest of this. Your spin on things is always interesting and this promises to be just as wonderful as everything else you've written. Especially with all those details and ideas swarming around in your head.
the first part of it is here -- http://auberus.livejournal.com/26707.html#cutid1 -- and if you drop me a line at auberus@gmail.com, I'll send you the part I'm playing with at the moment. (that also happens to be the first bit with the marauders in it.)
(finally had time to sit down and read this.) Wow, it is practically impossible to do a council scene and keep it both interesting and realistic, but you did. Very nice balance of exposition and personality. I am intrigued by the appearance of Orion Black and Kevin Potter; I can already tell that nothing is going to be black and white, and I am deeply curious to see where things go.
Since you seem to be asking for concrit, I find it a little hard to believe that in a roomful of civil servants no one is a hufflepuff, but that is all.
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At first, I'll admit that I was a tad skeptical, but only because I've fallen out of love and even like with history (bad experiences with senior year teachers and such), but I do like this! As always, I adore your characterisations and am genuinely interested in reading the rest of this. Your spin on things is always interesting and this promises to be just as wonderful as everything else you've written. Especially with all those details and ideas swarming around in your head.
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and if you drop me a line at auberus@gmail.com, I'll send you the part I'm playing with at the moment. (that also happens to be the first bit with the marauders in it.)
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Since you seem to be asking for concrit, I find it a little hard to believe that in a roomful of civil servants no one is a hufflepuff, but that is all.
The idea of Murrow as a wizard is highly amusing.
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