31 Days of Fic: Thirteen

[auberus]

Here it is.  I swear, writing this one was like pulling teeth.  A bored Sirius, a full moon night, and a potentially frightening discovery.

May 13, 1976:

Madame Pomfrey comes for Remus as soon as classes let out, which strikes Sirius as distinctly unfair, especially as Prongs and Wormtail are upstairs working on something for Divination and have left

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[misanagi]

So there are the signs of the war already. I loved this part as well.

[auberus]

glad you liked it.

(thank you for the feedback! (: )

[dr_schreaber]

A moment later, he hears James' voice in his right ear.
I have this *weakness* for cool spells. obviously. heee..

HOSHIT, menacing things afoot ;~;... gah, dark magic likes to kill the fluffy D: boooo. BUT YAY FULL MOOON YAAAY, and tomorrow, AFTER FULL MOON ZOMG YAYAYAYYY I'M SO EXCITED ^_^.

[auberus]

I have this *weakness* for cool spells. obviously. heee..

i have a weakness for inventing them sort of off the cuff to suit my narrative purposes. bad habit?

[dr_schreaber]

haha, hey, whatever works! :D

[__sine]

Padfoot realizes that something smells wrong. It's a cold smell, like long-dead bones, but with a foul underlay that clings like death-odor in his nose.

I see that there are dark things underfoot. Cannot wait to read more.

[auberus]

thank you! ::goes to post next part::

[marauderswolf]

Great, as usual! I love how you weave in little details and hints . . . *sighs* I will be thinking about this all day!

[auberus]

Thank you!

(i hope your day goes well, and that you don't strangle your students)

[elsane]

reposting for idiocy. sorry.
Teeth-pulling or no, that turned out beautifully: nicely paced, with a great hook at the end.

Sirius is certain that Gandalf is somehow based on Dumbledore: *snerk*

[auberus]

i couldn't resist that comparison, especially Gandalf from the Hobbit, who had much more of a sense of humour than he did in later books.