fic: To Bring the Second-Coming Quicker

[attempt_unique]

Title: To Bring the Second-Coming Quicker
Author: attempt-unique
Characters/Pairing: Sgt. Antonio “Poke” Espera
Rating/Warnings: PG13 - If you could handle the series, you can handle this fic
Disclaimer: This fic is based on the characters as portrayed in the miniseries Generation Kill. The characters do not belong to me, and I borrowed the names of Poke's wife

Comments

[puckling]

Oh, your Poke is completely and utterly awesome.

[attempt_unique]

thank you so much! i am glad that the character voice worked for you.

[missdunham]

This was perfect :D I loved your Poke <3

[attempt_unique]

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it

[oxoniensis]

That was great - I loved the building sense of the anger in him, the way he kept it inside when his little girl was there, the way his wife's touch calmed him. Such a good Poke voice.

[attempt_unique]

thank you so much! i'm glad you enjoyed it, and that the Poke voice worked for you.

[maurheti]

This is great -- you captured Poke's balance of anger and gentleness beautifully.

And this: He wraps his arms around her and leans his head into her neck, relaxing down into the scent and feel of her. -- so lovely...

[attempt_unique]

thank you so much. i'm really glad that you enjoyed this.

[sparky77]

Yay for Poke fic! This was lovely and awesome!

[attempt_unique]

Thank you so much!