Fic update: In Between Days (30/34)

[atrata]

Title: In Between Days (30/34)
Pairing: HP/SS
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Snape rescues kidnaps rescues shags Harry.
Notes: Previous chapters here.

Comments

[djin7]

*flails*
A-HAH! You got ME! What a wicked end to this chapter. I have a big cheshire grin on my face, thanks to you. Oh, I can't BELIEVE I didn't figure that out before! Even with your features: ClinicallyDepressed!Harry.
*flails some more*
Oh My God. I find I am speechless.
Gah.
What a fantastic story you have woven here. I don't believe it! Only one more chapter to go, right? Ah what a ride.
Thanks so much for this!
Cheers!

[atrata]

:D

Four more chapters to go, actually. But I'm glad for your grin.

[aubrem]

Really, really, really good chapter Atrata. That was some of the hottest sex I've read in a long time. What is it about bad, frustrating sex that is so hot?

The pacing, the flow of the emotions from tender back to scared and nasty - very very good. Each time with a little better understanding. I so love this.

Amazing characterization.

How the hell long is this story now? Before you post the last chapter I'm going to reread the whole thing so I can feel the emotional flow. Is it a novel yet?

[atrata]

How long's a novel? I've got no idea. IBD currently stands just over 58,000 words. I'm guessing the remaining chapters will be about as long as this one, which was about 5,000 words, so ... um, yes.

Anyway. Glad you liked the chapter. I was worried the sex dragged on and on and on.

[ladyjestyr]

Wow. Lady, you have a funny idea of "comfort".

They are so beautifully spiky, though. And man, this is all gonna end in tears...

[atrata]

They are so beautifully spiky, though.

Aren't they? How can you not love them? *g*

And man, this is all gonna end in tears...

I firmly refuse to say anything about this, as that sort of thing only ends in tears gets me in trouble.

[ladyjestyr]

Pfft. Snape wouldn't be happy with a happy ending. He doesn't seem to know how to handle the world when it's not proving his pessimism right.

:)

[atrata]

That's an excellent take on Snape. Sometimes I think I'm a lot more like him he's a lot more like me than is healthy. Or maybe I've just been writing him too long. Urg.

[friendtoanimals]

Perfect in everyway. I was very happy with every inch of this chapter. I love how you made Harry beg and then the ending...I am waiting for the next few chapters. Great Job!

[atrata]

thanks! :)

[reddwarfer]

that was some smegging lovely H/c. Beautiful. Harry was really charming.

Leila

[atrata]

Aw, thanks. Harry definitely has his moments. :)