Fic update: In Between Days (24/?)

[atrata]

Title: In Between Days (24/?)
Pairing: HP/SS
Rating: NC-17
Summary: You know the drill. Snape rescues Harry from the Dursleys. They argue and shag and learn Dark Arts.
Feedback: Craved, cherished, etc.
Notes: I'm not caught up on comments from teh pr0n, but I've read and appreciated all of them. Will respond soon. Previous chapters here.

Comments

[reddwarfer]

I almost enjoyed this bit as much as the last chapter which contained one of the bleeding best sex scenes it has been my pleasure to read. The dynamic between them is so...guh.

Leila

[atrata]

The dynamic between them is so...guh.

Yeah, that's a pretty good word for it. *g*

Thanks for reading. :)

[djin7]

Damn that Snape runs hot and cold, don't he? C'mere, c'mere, c'mere..go'way, go'way, go'way. And that disclaimer! How noble of him to to tell Harry he can stop anytime, all he has to do is say so. And then says the same applies to him. And the skeptic in me says he intends to use it against Harry like a weapon, you know, the old, "You aren't doing what I told you to, so this *thing* we have can no longer go on" type thing.
But the Snarry fan in me wants to believe that Snape can sense the possible *addiction* that Harry can become, if he isn't already, and THAT would throw a monkey wrench into his "I'm a pureblood who will remain standing after the war for the winning side, whatever it may be" type of plan. *nods*

I think I'll run with that one until you say different! *g*

And a big squeee for updating so soon AGAIN!
Thanks,
cheers!

[atrata]

Hrm. I didn't get much of a go'way vibe from Snape, so much as a vibe of, "shit, I made this whole giant point this morning about CONSTANT VIGILANCE and NOT SLACKING OFF and then went and spent a few hours fucking Harry, threatening to negate that nice temper tantrum and all that difficult crucio work. TRAINING! NOW!"

But, yeah, I suppose he does run hot and cold, although so does Harry.

And the skeptic in me says he intends to use it against Harry like a weapon

I think he could have done so before, if he were going to do it. But he's yet to hold it over Harry's head, so we can hope he won't decide to start.

Anyway, as always, thanks for reading and leaving thoughtful commentary. I heart thoughtful commentary. :)

[aubrem]

Harry opened his eyes and saw the Dark Mark in front of him...."You know," said a dry voice in his ear, "your fascination with that thing is rather morbid."

My God you know how to hit my kinks. You wrote that for me, didn't you? Didn't you?

Harry tensed, and before he could stop himself, said, "Well, I'm not the one that liked it so much I got it tattooed on my forearm."

::snort:: Harry's now my hero.

[atrata]

Well, yes. Ballsy little fuck. *g*

[loupgarou1750]

now that was the perfect follow-up to teh hawt sex. Snape's moral ambiguity all out in the open now, the game he's running on Harry (and maybe himself?) about "you're choosing this". And Harry's response feels very real, "I don't like you and I shouldn't want this but ohgoditfeelssogood!". I'm so impressed witchu. Did I say that before? If I didn't, I shoulda.

"That-" He looked at pointedly at Harry's cock. you might want to get rid of that first 'at'.

[atrata]

Mmmm, moral ambiguity. It's totally what's for dinner. Thanks for reading. :)

and pointing that out! Fixed. :)

[cydah]

*grins, I love their interactions

[atrata]

thanks! They're very fun to write. :)