FIC: Successful Secrets of the Sexual Kind (Tony/Pepper, NC-17)

[atrata]

Title: Successful Secrets of the Sexual Kind
Fandom: Iron Man
Pairing: Tony/Pepper
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Five times they don't have sex, and think about it anyway.
Disclaimer: Not mine, not real, no money, no harm, etc.
A/N: OMG, the tenses on this thing practically KILLED ME. Argh. One day, I swear to god, I will have a pairing for which I do

Comments

[commodoremarie]

*dead from guh*

The first one is my favorite, but the fifth really caps it and makes it... sad yet wonderful.

And all that time you spent on the tenses? THANK YOU! It really, really, really just worked. Oh man, saving this to Memories.

[atrata]

god, the TENSES, don't remind me. I actually think they're still wrong in the third one because I totally forgot to go back and fix that section because I was trying to make the ending not completely lame. ANYWAY. Thank you for reading, and I'm very glad you liked it. :D

[commodoremarie]

Haha! Well, if they were? I didn't notice - I had already melted.

[queen_haq]

This was fucking fantastic.

And I just have to say thank you for using the word 'fuck' as much as possible. In my head, Tony Stark fucks; the boy does not make love. Heh.

[atrata]

hahah Tony making love. Yeah. No, not so much.

Thanks so much for reading!

[lady_s]

Wow, I really loved this! I loved how Tony's fantasies are about what he's doing and pepper's was about what she's not doing. Very clever. I also enjoyed how it started out completely animalistic and sexual, but turned into more of a romance. I hate these kind because they don't end up together, but it's the most realistic and I could totally see all this actually playing out. Great job!

[atrata]

That... is actually a really interesting point, about the difference between their fantasies. Huh.

Anyway, yes, thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you ended up liking it.

[nm42]

Ummm...I do believe I cant think at the curent moment seeing as this is filled with how simple should I put it?

....NNNnnnGUHHH!

Restraining fic+ daydream worthyness of senseless smut=awesome
Actual senseless screwing=awesome-o!

[atrata]

Thank you so much!

[serrico]

Restraint and fantasy and the somewhere-in-between that really *is* the final section, and...eeeee, *nice.*

Yes. :)

[atrata]

Thank you!