EXO | When The Curtain Falls | PG-13

Jul 27, 2014 04:33

When The Curtain Falls
PG-13
3197w
Yixing/Jongin
Jongin has never liked the new kid in the dance club and now he has to work with him for a dance.

There's no one Jongin hates more... )

fandom: exo, pairing: yixing/jongin, !fiction, rating: pg-13

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ubiquitousecho July 29 2014, 21:07:26 UTC

“Jongin’s wet lips moving against his neck makes Sehun giggle but it turns into a groan when Jongin bites instead.

“The fuck was that for?”

“You laughed at me.”” This part made me really happy for some reason LOL I really like the friendship between them c:

“I hate how he smiles politely to everyone, showing everybody that dimple when he should save it for someone special but he smiles at everyone as though they’re all special.” This makes my heart flutter because it’s just so… sweet <3

At the part where Jongin was insulting Yixing made me super upset, and I wanted to lash out at him and tell him to stop and take back all the words he said because hoW DARE HE SPEAK LIKE THAT TO HIM, and when Yixing looked up and said the reason he joined was because of him I just wanted to pull Yixing into my arms and comfort him, but he’s strong. He took the things Jongin said to him with stride and I really like how you characterized him as someone who can take criticism ( ... )

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xxhna August 10 2014, 16:28:42 UTC
Yixing's character here is AMAZING. He is so strong to stand that lashing from Jongin. I mean taking that from someone you like hurts. But Jongin, you are mean kid. I'm just glad he confessed before he really messed things up with Yixing.

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