Fic: Please (Angel the Series RPS, Cracktrailer Verse)

[ely_jan]

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Please

Author: ely_jan
Pairings: Vincent Kartheiser/David Boreanaz (featuring Jason Hall/Seth Green)
Fandom: Angel the Series RPS; Cracked-Out Trailerverse (At least my interpretation as a huge fan of the cracktrailerRating: NC17

Comments

[stoney321]

his fingers were like sticks so fragile and thin like bird bones and Vincent couldn’t stop shaking as he knelt there staring at the pink bits of bone that weren’t supposed to be on the outside.

ooooh, that's vivid. Ouch on this one, but well painted images.

is that a dropped tag at the end of 3 pp?

The repeated "please" is a killer, Ely.

[ely_jan]

Yeah, this one was very much an 'ouch' all around. I do tend to write extremes. And thanks so much for catching that dropped tag! *fixes* Sheesh, that's what I get for doing my own beta, huh?

Appreciate your feedback - new characters always make me a nervous wreck. How many gay men can live in my head anyway?

Thanks so much!

[amy_star_]

Oh.
Ow.
Poor Vinnie. Poor Seth!

My heart is just broken here.

Amazing.

[ely_jan]

Thanks, darlin - means so much to me! *feeds you chocolate and snuggles you up* It is rather Ow, though - was a bit worried it might be too much.

*hugs you tight*

[crimsonsenya]

I can't tell you how glad I am that somebody still writes in the Trailerpark verse! This was raw, beautiful and heartbreaking. The imagery in the with the hands was very powerful. To my memories this goes...

[ely_jan]

It's one of my favorite verses as well, and I was really tentative about trying it out because it's been written by some amazing writers all of whom I'm more than a little fangirl over. But this prompt rather dragged me into it head first - from the moment I read it, this verse was where my head was.

Thrilled you enjoyed it and I'm so flattered you'd put it in your memories - thank you so very much!