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Blinding Pain - Part Two

Feb 22, 2012 10:18

Title: Blinding Pain
Chapter: 1/1
Author: atmosphere_zero
Beta-Reader: misfitmisfit (Thanks a lot! <3 ( Read more... )

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wnb_angel February 22 2012, 19:19:06 UTC

Just read this and I loved it <3. Kazuki and Manabu aren't my OTP but they are growing on me more and more. Really liked this and how Kazuki just acted on impulse that got him a boyfriend in the end.

atmosphere_zero February 23 2012, 03:37:27 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting! <3

I'm so glad to hear that you loved it! <3 I actually had such a struggle writing them, lol. Haha, same here. After writing and re-reading this story when I was done, this pairing really grew onto me.

Teehee, it's a good thing he listened to his instincts or else he might've not gotten together with Manabu, x3 I'm happy to hear that you liked it, ^^

visualkeigirl February 24 2012, 02:14:00 UTC

Awwwwww

This was just adorable.
Like I have said before, I love the way you portray the guys and once again, I am in love with them because of you. ^^
Not my OTP but Kazuki and Manabu is really starting to grow on. You just make them soo adorable.
Love the way that you ended this with Kazuki's impulsive side on how he "asked" Manabu.

atmosphere_zero February 24 2012, 02:28:51 UTC

Aww, thank you so much for reading and commenting! <333

Aww, thank you for the compliment, ^///^ I actually had trouble writing them since, at first, I never imagined them as a pair, but after writing through many drafts and re-reading the final product, I really love them as well. I'm even itching to write them again, XD They're really starting to grow on me too.

Yeah, they are really cute at the end, :3 Haha, thanks, x) I was trying to figure out how Kazuki would ask Manabu and well, Kazuki's impulsiveness was the winner, xD

Btw, if you don't mind me asking, who is your OTP?

visualkeigirl February 24 2012, 02:54:06 UTC

I told you I was going to spam you and I am finally doing it lol. <3

Yeah they don't seem like a pair but you made it work nicely. You should write more of them. They are a very cute couple. And when you spend so much time writing a certain couple, you tend to fall more and more for the couple. ^^

I can just see Kazuki doing that. He can be so impulsive so it works lol.

I am still trying to really figure out my OTP for ScReW, but I tend to find myself going for ByouxKazuki most of the time. They are my two favorite members. But honestly, I am not entirely sure just yet lol.

atmosphere_zero February 24 2012, 03:23:16 UTC

Lol, enjoying the spam, =D

Yeah, I freaked out for a few seconds wondering how I should write them, lol. But I somehow made it work, lol. Haha, yeah. I just need a new storyline, lol, xDD Yes, they are indeed a very cute couple, <3 I know! After writing the same couple and even people, you end up liking them and falling in love with them. It's almost like you grow and develop with them, xD.

Oooh, I see. Haha, I really like the KazukixByou or the JinxByou pairing, lol. Or the KazukixManabu pairing, :3 But I've yet to experiment with all of them so I'm not sure about my OTP for the band either, lol. Do you have any OTPs outside ScReW?

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