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athyn

[Final Fantasy VIII] Meant To Be

Jun 04, 2006 00:03

Title: Meant To Be
Status: Complete
Fandom: Final Fantasy VIII
Characters/Pairings: Seifer, Edea
Rating: PG
Warnings: Spoilers
Disclaimer: Final Fantasy VIII belongs to Squaresoft. I do not own the characters or setting, nor do I make any profit from my fanfiction, which is purely for my own enjoyment.
Notes: 421 words. For fated_children, challenge ( Read more... )

character: seifer almasy, community: fated_children, length: 300-500 words, fandom: final fantasy viii

Comments 12

nanthimus June 4 2006, 05:41:30 UTC

Wow. I really like this. Seifer's worship and Edea's utter power, her utter disdain for everyone around her. I love it.

And then the ending. Awesomeness. Great job. ;)

athyn June 4 2006, 05:51:28 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it :)

xerne June 4 2006, 06:24:31 UTC

Lovely work. Nice voice.

lassarina June 4 2006, 06:32:53 UTC

Thank you. I was trying really hard to get into his voice for this; I've had this claim for almost 2 months and it took me *so long* to write this piece! Well, once I actually started writing, it took less than an hour. But it was getting my head in the right place that I struggled with.

rosa_heartlily June 4 2006, 15:40:55 UTC

Nice perspective. Good work.

athyn June 4 2006, 19:01:47 UTC

Thanks :D I like Seifer, he's definitely my favourite of the characters.

asoniel June 7 2006, 01:12:01 UTC

Edea...must worship Edea. She is sooo beautiful...must *shakes head* Whoa! Got caught up in the moment there! Great imagery! Loved it!

athyn June 7 2006, 01:24:57 UTC

Thank you! :D

darkrosetiger June 13 2006, 02:37:47 UTC

Oh, I like this very much. I've always wondered what Seifer might have been thinking in that moment, and if it wasn't this, well...it should have been.

athyn June 13 2006, 03:51:28 UTC

Oh, thank you ♥ What a great thing to hear!