Comments | athyn: [Final Fantasy X] A Summoner's Faith, Chapter Two: Initiation

athyn

[Final Fantasy X] A Summoner's Faith, Chapter Two: Initiation

Jul 12, 2007 21:35

Pairings/Characters: Yuna
Rating: PG
Warnings: Significant spoilers for all of Final Fantasy X.
Notes: The second chapter of "A Summoner's Faith." Other chapters here.
Summary: Yuna's training as a summoner continues as she learns to cast magic.

( Initiation )

fandom: final fantasy x, character: yuna

Comments 6

rosa_heartlily July 14 2007, 19:53:38 UTC

Wow! A lesson in how magic works - very interesting.

lassarina July 14 2007, 20:05:17 UTC

My new greatest love when it comes to fanfic is running rampant with meta. I love it. It is the best thing about Final Fantasy: getting to run around and pick at how stuff works. I'm glad you liked it!

football_girl August 30 2007, 10:40:10 UTC

I have to tell you, it is so enjoyable to read a good, spell-checked, well written fic! :) They seem to be rare. You have wonderful language, and it's easy and enjoyable to read. I loved the idea about magic. You obviously thought it through, and explained it well - it makes perfect sense! And both Yuna and Kimahri are very in character. Well done!

athyn September 3 2007, 22:01:03 UTC

Thank you :) Meta is one of my great joys when it comes to writing fic, so I tend to overuse it a bit. I'm glad it worked in this instance. Thank you very much for the feedback!

thenicochan September 14 2007, 06:41:43 UTC

Absolutely loved the description of magic. That kinda stuff facisnates me but I totally don't think I could write it well. Your descriptions were perfect.

And I love all the "ZOMG, PLZ DON'T BE LULU" going throughout the fic. It makes me kinda warm and fuzzy because Lulu cares about Yuna so much and It sucks that Yuna is going behind her back and being all self-sacrifical. Of course, Yuna ends up developing one of the worlds biggest martyr complexs so meh. *shrugs*

Anyway, wonderful writing. I'd eagerly anticpate the rest.

athyn September 14 2007, 06:47:18 UTC

The whole going behind Lulu's back thing started when I saw something - I think it's when they're talking about Chappu - about how Lulu originally didn't want Yuna to be a summoner and didn't want her to have to sacrifice that way, but I think in a lot of ways Lulu underestimated Yuna. (I don't think she's likely to make that mistake again anytime soon.)