[Final Fantasy VI] Opposites

[athyn]

Title: Opposites
Status: Complete
Fandom: Final Fantasy VI
Characters/Pairings: Ifrit/Shiva
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Notes: 100 words. Written for intorporeal's request.
Disclaimer: Final Fantasy VI belongs to Squaresoft. I own neither the characters nor the setting, nor do I gain any profit from my fanfiction, which is purely for my own enjoyment.

Comments

[celeloriel]

Like the idea behind this.

Also, as a beta: where the machines rip out his essence bit by bit by bit and leaving him a drained and empty husk -that caught my eye.

You need to change one or more of those verbs so they're parallel.

[athyn]

Oh God you're right *headdesks* I hate when I miss stupid simple things like that. Thank you.