Grains of Golden Sand 1/?

[athyestean]

Title: Grains of Golden Sand
Author: Ren Apple
Pairing: GaaSasu
Warning: Yaoi. Death. Mature Themes.
Rating: R
Word Length: 2280 words

Summary: He was ordered to betray the ones he loved most. Now, he must fight for what he has left.

A/N: Still not beta-ed but don’t hate me. I have totally re-edited this, and it took awhile. Chapter Three is coming! I

Comments

Laughs

[kina_chan]

*falls out of chair and rols around on the floor, holding stomach* Yes I know I'm morbid for thinking that was funny but it was!
"He cut off Orochimaru-sama’s goddamn hand!”
*Laughs some more, crying because of laughing so hard* I'm sorry.
Good chapter, very good! ^.^

Re: Laughs

[athyestean]

Well... That is a wee bit odd. Lol. But I did like that line too.

Thanks, you know I didn't really want to post this yet, but ehh... there wasn't anything else to do.

Thanks for commenting.

[unikorn]

hmmmm!!! I am intrigued!!

[athyestean]

Yay! I am glad. GaaSasu is so underappreciated.

[nayanroo]

Aha! So this is the fic--ooh, it looks interesting! I'll have to keep up on this one~

[athyestean]

Haha... You just wanted to see yourself cited. *sticks out tongue* But thank you again for letting me use that line. It was way better than anything I could have thought of.

And I just love your icon, Lol.

[kris18234]

Interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^

[athyestean]

Wow, thank you. It will probabably be out in the next few days, if my computer agrees with me. She is being tempermental. *pouts*

[athyestean]

Lol, of course seriously. I have been working on chapter two and it is in my editing phase right before I will post it, but RL is being evil. But I promise I will post this thing before midnight.

^_^

[happyfunshiny]

this is kl there isn't enough sasu/gaara ^_^ more