Comments | athenaswirls: One Good Deed....Part Nine ( NC17) Jared/Jensen AU

athenaswirls

One Good Deed....Part Nine ( NC17) Jared/Jensen AU

Dec 09, 2009 19:44

One Good Deed...9/10

Rating: NC17
Warnings: Naughty boys doing naughty things
Disclaimer: I own my kinks, not theirs.

Summary: Jared and Jensen meet when Jensen rescues a hurt kitten and takes her to the animal shelter where Jared is a vet. I was so freaked out when I wrote porn for the first time, but then chapter eight was almost entirely ( Read more... )

one good deed, fic, au, jared/jensen

Comments 21

letsgetstarted December 10 2009, 01:52:05 UTC

ooooh do i get the jensen two thumbs up again???

Oh My Gawd! Jensen shot - scumbag I wanna hunt that mugger down myself....poor Jay thinking that he was gonna be alone again. Good boy for waking up Jensen.

In the gutter you say - move over sister cos I'm jumping right in next to you!

love it!

xxx

athenaswirls December 10 2009, 02:01:59 UTC

*points to icon* You're the first!! *hugs*

Eeehhh. I know! Shooting Jensen came out of nowhere. I was walking him down the alley and...

I still have no excuse. I blame that bastard mugger!

Yay!! Love having your company in the gutter :)

kristophorios December 10 2009, 01:53:09 UTC

Aww.. I love this story.....and because of a little kitty...

athenaswirls December 10 2009, 02:04:20 UTC

Thank you :)

One tiny kitty & look what happens...

:)

maddonna001 December 10 2009, 02:06:57 UTC

I really liked the way you described Jensen being shot and his coma. brilliant chapter.

athenaswirls December 10 2009, 02:11:40 UTC

Hi :)

Thank you! This is the most serious chapter I've written, and I really appreciate your comment!

maddonna001 December 10 2009, 02:30:20 UTC

I bet you didn't plan it to write this way, it just came to you. That's how it usually is with the most intense parts ;-)

p.s.: lj sux for the lack of notification emails :-(

athenaswirls December 10 2009, 02:57:15 UTC

I had no intention of getting so serious, but you're completely right! He was headed home to Jared and then...he wasn't. Hope that makes sense :)

:( LJ does suck at notifications rite now! *makes shifty eyes* Let's pretend that I won't be constantly refreshing the story for new comments. lol.

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athenaswirls December 10 2009, 03:07:00 UTC

First: There is definitely room for one more! Second: I might have panicked a little when I realized I shot one of the main characters. Third: I'll make it up to you with an extra long final chapter!!

*hugs you*

woman_of_ December 10 2009, 02:52:13 UTC

Great how everyone rallied round to help Jensen and Jared when they needed it.

athenaswirls December 10 2009, 03:08:41 UTC

Thank you!

I felt so guilty for letting Jensen get shot, I thought I owed him that. lol.