Smallville Season 11: Superman Part 1

[athena606]

A/N So the finale was a actually a season finale leaving us with a kickass cliffhanger… [**warning although I’m a big Tollie fan there will be some Chlollie at the beginning. Also just like the show the main pairing is Clark and Lois]

Comments

[ctbn60]

Oh god you saved Tess!!! I adore it! I felt her being stabbed was one of the major things wrong with the ending. You fixed it. It does look like she will have a tough time though. I'm looking forward to more.

[athena606]

thank you! Yeah as much as i loved her being firmly on the side of the heroes; I want my tessie to LIVE!!!

[svgurl]

Yay! Tess is alive. That's very good. I like that idea. Her dying made me very sad. This is a great story so far. I love the interactions between all the characters. The Chlo-Lo moment made me especially happy. Chloe apologizing for being distant was sweet. Of course Lois would forgive her. Love the cousins.

Lois stopped him with a finger to his lips. “Stop right there Clark first of all, I love you too and second it’s not like you planned for a crazy despot god to try to take over the planet by hurling his planet straight at us just so you wouldn’t get married!”
That's such a Lois thing to say. I could easily picture it coming out from her mouth.

And this:

Oliver cleared his throat. “It’s nice to know that a little thing like an actual apocalypse can’t stop the two of you from a nauseating display of sugary sweetness.” Totally cracked me up. A very Ollie thing to say. And yes, Oliver, even the world almost ending can't stop Clois from being adorable

[athena606]

Thanks so much for all the positive feedback xD. And as a Tollie fan I want to say Tollie but I don't think it should be that easy for Oliver he loves both these women dearly for different reasons. But yes Clois is the best & Lois is so much fun to write I hope I can capture everyone's voice well

[svgurl]

You're welcome! Actually, I actually asked for myself. I am a Chlollie shipper so if you are going to switch the pair, I wanted to be mentally prepared. That's all. :)

[athena606]

lol ok in that case be prepared =D

[eternal_moonie]

JESS I absolutely LOVE this so far!!!

Cannot wait to read more!!

[athena606]

Awww thanks Jan!! *hugs*

[airygold]

I find the picture you have of Clark in the wet white t-shirt on the right side of my screen very distracting..... :o

Great story!

[athena606]

LOL thanks!

[tomgirl26]

Hey Jess,
I love the story!! Love how you are filling in the blanks with what happened after the credits rolled; I love how Tess is still with us; I know she'll make it through; and I love how Clark is named Superman!!! Can't wait to read more :D

[athena606]

thanks Patti ;) so glad your liking it.