Fourth Time's the Charm (PG-13)

[atalanta84]

Title: Fourth Time’s the Charm
Author: atalanta84
Rating: PG-13 for UST and innuendo
Word Count: ~ 4400
Summary: Draco had no idea why he kept kissing Hermione Granger. The one thing he did know was that it wasn’t his fault.
A/N: Wrote this for kalina_blue in the luvlikerocketz Halloween exchange, and I thought I'd post it here too. Her prompt was "Draco and Hermione's fourth kiss

Comments

[dollfaced]

I really liked the third kiss, I'm a sucker for the angst.

“Malfoy, when you’re trying to apologize to a woman, you send her chocolates or flowers…not enslaved magical creatures!” I lol'd. A lot.

Very nice work :)

[atalanta84]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[darth_kittius]

Wow! I love it! There's just little else to say because I can't pick one part of it that was better than the rest!

[atalanta84]

Thank you so much! I really enjoy writing humor, but never get the chance to write enough of it!

LOVE your icon, btw. :)

[blackestfaery]

UGH. Draco and Hermione just work. Drunk, pissed off, emo, and everything in between-they just work so well together.

I have to say kiss #3 was my favourite because they were sober-ish, there was angst, and seeing them in those situations where a well-worded response makes all the difference is so much fun.

The last line was great and ties everything together. Yay for sex at the office although it's not so awesome when it happens in real life. But that's a story for another day ;)

[atalanta84]

Glad you liked it! And I agree, if my coworkers were actually doing the nasty in their offices at work, it would weird me out. But with Draco and Hermione? Totally acceptable, of course!

[crissytje]

{“Granger, you actually missed the most important match of your boyfriend’s career…to knit hats?”}=> but it does kind of sound ridiculous no?? I mean come on ... Really?? I am for career as priority but knitting before that:p. You can always knit:o

misunderestimate xd hmm although not so fluent to pronounce xd I love this word xd

Xxx

[voldyismyfather]

Its really good :D

[atalanta84]

Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)