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Fic: "Jump" (Weekly Challenge #35, "A Place in My Heart")

Feb 25, 2008 21:59

Title: "Jump"
Author: Sgt. Mayhem
Rating: R-ish for dark themes
Warnings: Horrible, horrible angst.
Summary: Weekly challenge #35: "A Place in My Heart."
Sometimes you only love what you know you can't have. Real!Jack POV.
Feedback: Give me it. Comments or the.antirazor[at]gmail[dot]com.
( Love is not a victory march. )

fanfic: r, user: shane_mayhem

Comments 9

lilithbint February 26 2008, 06:30:36 UTC

*wibble*
achingly all too possible.

shane_mayhem February 26 2008, 06:34:35 UTC

I made myself cry.

lol.*whimper*

nightporters February 26 2008, 07:25:59 UTC

I beta. avon09@googlemail.com

gauky_1976 February 26 2008, 08:05:45 UTC

I beta as well and would love to read your work.

Gauky_1976@yahoo.com.au

kindofwhimsical February 26 2008, 14:08:36 UTC

Well, that was a depressing way to start the morning! Really well done, though, I loved it despite the sadness.

shane_mayhem February 26 2008, 20:02:26 UTC

*sniff* I know! I'm sorry! I'll be better next time!

kindofwhimsical February 26 2008, 20:08:01 UTC

Well, there is something inherently depressing about these two that is part of their charm -- I'd like to write about them eventually, and the two story lines I'm considering are pretty bleak. Poor things!

mondeo February 26 2008, 16:54:35 UTC

Aaaw, that's so sad! I love it though. You write Jack so well =)

And I look forward to the monthly challenge fic, since there hasn't exactly been a flood of entries this month :P

shane_mayhem February 26 2008, 20:08:04 UTC

It's gonna be a long one! O_o Might have to post it in parts. Oy.
But thank you! I'm more motivated now that I know people are looking forward to it. :D