Comments | astrum_presul: 24 Fic: Just An Apology 1/1 (Tony/Michelle)

astrum_presul

24 Fic: Just An Apology 1/1 (Tony/Michelle)

Mar 26, 2011 14:19

Title: Just An Apology
Fandom: 24
Characters: Michelle Dessler/Tony Almeida
Prompt: #075. Shade.
Word Count: 901
Rating: PG
Summary: Tony makes an uncharacteristic move, he apologizes.
Author's Notes: So I have no idea if this even works in the timeline of Day 3, but I really don’t care. Takes place during episode 3x08, after Michelle leaves Tony’s ( Read more... )

tony/michelle, 24, fic, fanfic100

Comments 9

jimkeller24 March 26 2011, 18:48:14 UTC

Awwww...esome! I totally love these little pieces of fluff straight out of show-real life. *sigh* I want them back.

And this

“A healthy Tony Almeida never apologizes.”

made me lol. :D

astrum_presul March 26 2011, 22:02:28 UTC

Awww, yay. I'm glad you loved it! I do too, I really really do too.

haha, I know. It's so true, too. The man'll apologize for anything that's not his fault (getting shot, getting kidnapped), but he just can't do it when he's actually dooone something.

Thank you again!

jimkeller24 March 27 2011, 11:53:10 UTC

Haha, so true! I still remember that scene in the hospital, when Michelle tells him how much he scared her and just goes "I know, I'm sorry." :D Really cute scene anyway.

yaboiksar March 27 2011, 00:16:16 UTC

Man, have I missed you!

Loved this and damn why couldn't we have gotten this on the show instead?

astrum_presul March 27 2011, 15:45:27 UTC

Aww, I've missed me too, haha. It feels nice to finally be getting some of these things out there again.

Thankie! I'm glad it worked. :)

your writing anonymous March 27 2011, 03:10:36 UTC

Ok, so I am the worst loser to only be commenting now after I've read nearly every single one of your Tony/Michelle fics. I recently got hooked on the show and couldn't get enough of the Tony/Michelle relationship. Not sure how I managed to stumbled upon your fic site, but I must say your writing is incredible in every way. I was up way later than I should have been for about 3 nights to read all the stories. My only disappointment was that the most recent stories were dated from last year, so you don't know how glad I am that you are continuing! And if you need inspiration, I'd love to read more fics set during or post-day 4. Not as many fics seem to explore the day 4 part of Tony & Michelle's story. Your work is awesome, so please please please keep up the writing!

Re: your writing astrum_presul March 27 2011, 20:03:42 UTC

Oh my, thank you! You have no idea how much I appreciate the praise. The last year or so has been difficult for me to continue writing because I was in the process of finishing school and dealing with all the stress that goes along with that.

Thank you again! I do love getting some direction as to what people would like to see. Post-day 4 is actually a favorite of mine, so I'll definitely do my best to write some more from that time. I think I have the beginnings of stories for every time right now, so we'll see what strikes me next!

Thank you!

bookworm0503 April 1 2011, 12:31:27 UTC

I keep thinking i've reviewed these and then realize I haven't.

I loooove this. Tony needed to apologize then and I love how he does it but kind of knows that won't get him off the hook just yet. I love how Michelle's just patient with it even though she has every right to be fuming. And I love the interactions between them.

It was a lovely come-home-from-work treat :)

astrum_presul April 1 2011, 13:09:14 UTC

Haha, nooo worries. It's the thought that counts.

Awww, thank yooooou. I'll be honest, I had the first paragraph written for so long, I completely forgot where I'd intended to go. So I really was flying by the seat of my pants for this one. haha.

Hopefully I'll have more of these little treats for you. <3