❀ first comes baby; for bringnsexsebaek

Oct 28, 2016 21:09

author: london9calling
for: bringnsexsebaek
title: First Comes Baby
rating: PG-13
length: ~7.3k
summary: Kyungsoo and Sehun are practically strangers who both want to adopt a child. Maybe doing it together isn’t such a bad idea- except everyone else thinks it is.
notes: To the recipient - I hope this meets your expectations, thank you for giving me such an amazing prompt to ( Read more... )

round two: fic, length: 5k-10k, rating: pg-13

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bringnsexsebaek October 28 2016, 23:49:33 UTC
Eeeeeeeee this is even better than I had hoped for!!!!! All of their interactions were actually just...
Amazing.
And I like how it started with friendships; I really enjoyed those interactions as well~
BUT YEAH
Running into all sorts of problems with "baby" but growing closer with each other... Through hilarious and annoying things... ;;;; just how I imagined it<3
And that building attraction UGHILOVEIT.
And I really enjoyed the ending, as well. The fact that they do end up adopting when they are finally ready ;;;; sooooocute!!!!
Thanks so much for thisssssssss!!!!!!!! ^w^ Iloveitandappreciatetheeffortyouputintothishilariousandadorablestory

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london9calling December 2 2016, 04:09:52 UTC
jalkdjklasj your comment made my day seriously! I was so worried I got it wrong haha. Thank you so much for the amazing prompt and for liking the story I made it into <33333

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trangsformer October 29 2016, 01:24:32 UTC
wow this is prolly one of the most orginal prompt and story i have read in a while and u written it so so lovely !!!!!!!
I love the dialogues and their dynamic and budding friendship and the trust they want to put on each other, nd my fave thing is Ksoo's clear interest in Sehun bc he would blush every single time Sehun is in his proximity (i dont blame him i would be too lol) nd Sehun just so teasingly adorable all the time its so obvious they like each other.
the ending is perfect because now they rlly do trust each other and ready to raise the baby together. nd this time they doing it out of love and not loneliness!
thank so much for writing it!!!! i rlly enjoyed it :)

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london9calling December 2 2016, 04:09:03 UTC
Gahh, their dynamic was so much fun to write in this fic! Thank you so much for reading and commenting <333

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dubudork October 29 2016, 07:57:37 UTC
I'm so glad they finally got to adopt a baby in the end and of course, got together! This was the perfect mix of funny and cute, thank you!

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london9calling December 2 2016, 04:08:16 UTC
Thank you for reading!!! I really appreciate your comment <3

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vavole October 30 2016, 20:35:45 UTC
Refreshing and original, I really enjoyed this story. I love their dynamic and how nicely they fit each other. It was cute to read of all the troubles they had with the baby and how they tried to understand each other.
I'm really happy this story has a happy ending and sesoo got to adopt a (real) baby in the end, when they are truly ready for the big step <3
Thanks for writing! ^^

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london9calling December 2 2016, 04:07:51 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting <333

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prideaux October 31 2016, 12:25:19 UTC
This story is all kinds of adorable and just really funny too!! I loved all the little sesoo moments and their blooming friendship, bonding over that baby simulator from hell omg (i think i would have tossed that thing out of the window not even joking here). Sesoo's relationship evolved in such a nice way in this and the ending was very precious! Much fluffy and fun times!! Thank you so much for this lovely fic <3

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london9calling December 2 2016, 04:06:21 UTC
I would have tossed it out the window too OMG. haha. Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

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