Bonnie&Klaus Feral

[astrid26a]

AN: This a prequel to Change
Disclaimer: I own nothing except my own smutty thoughts! Bonnie,Klaus and TVD characters belong to the CW and other folks that get the money!
Summary: What happened when Klaus let Bonnie off the wall?

Comments

[armless_phelan]

Nice! Could do with some cleaned up grammar, mostly missing commas, but it's a nice little PWP. :D

Klonnie fic

[sparklingdrops]

OMG LMAOOO parts of this fic just made me laugh, the things they said were hilarious.

I think it is as you said yourself quite OOC x) but still a very enjoyable read. The innerdialogue and overall vibe of the story is nice.

I do have one question, how can a hybrid not be strong enough to ripp silk sashes that hold him to a bed? but that is just me being picky. :)

Re: Klonnie fic

[astrid26a]

Magic Min! Magic!

KLONNIEE

[ext_697414]

My main problem is simply the formatting; I try to use a TON of line breaks and new paragraphs in my fics, simply so its easier to see where you leave off reading, etc., because it's hard for me myself to read a bulky paragraph, i get lost.
But OH MAN that was hot! Bonnie wanting to kill everyone is freaking hilarious, but I could understand her resentment, and that resentment reaching a peaking point esp when they didn't come to save her, etc. The smut was great! Not over-the-top, the word "cock" wasn't flying around...Excellent job Chin.

Review for Bonnie and Klaus chapter

[ext_815841]

Another well done chapter, a bit funny and odd at parts but over all very good job with the intamacy of this chapter but still keeping it to the storyline without going too overboard.