Comments | astrantiapetals: The Off-White Picket Fence

astrantiapetals

The Off-White Picket Fence

Nov 22, 2013 00:58

You left home wearing his kiss ( Read more... )

Comments 14

parachuterawr November 22 2013, 12:53:32 UTC

omg the last sentence.

and and and this one "The gentle lilac scent of her hair, dancing eyelashes along your cheek when you make love; femininity divine."

That was beautiful. Thanks for sharing :)

astrantiapetals November 22 2013, 19:15:23 UTC

Aww thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read this little piece =))

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astrantiapetals November 23 2013, 21:59:27 UTC

Thank you! I really enjoy being succinct with writing - sometimes less is more (at least for me). I'm happy you decided to come out from the shadows and let me know how much you like reading what I write! Stuff like that always makes me feel warm and nice lol

Thanks again for reading! =)

kaorujin November 23 2013, 00:38:18 UTC

I envy how you can weave a wave of emotions with so few words. The beautiful and intricate beauty of each description is just FJDSKLFJDSLKFd. Seriously, I have no words to describe how pretty this blurb is. Kudos!

astrantiapetals November 23 2013, 22:03:35 UTC

Oh, thank you! I feel humbled by your FJDSKLFJDSLKFd'ing ^_^ Thanks for taking the time to read this short piece.

checkinyourbra November 23 2013, 05:30:41 UTC

Gurl. GURL.

Idk what to quote because this whole piece was incredible. So much said in so little words.

NVM. I have one: The gentle lilac scent of her hair, dancing eyelashes along your cheek when you make love; femininity divine. Scent, feeling, femininity in general...stuff that further convinced me that women are so...*siiiiiigh* I have experience with the eyelashes along the cheek thing and it's so <3.

Love it. Love you. :3

astrantiapetals November 23 2013, 22:06:47 UTC

HAY GURL!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I actually have no experience with the eyelashes thing (but it's something I think about a lot haha).

<3 you too ^_^

boxxsaltz November 24 2013, 16:36:09 UTC

Never do I walk away from one of your writings without such emotion. Short and simple and packed with everything you need to know and feel. Brilliant.

astrantiapetals November 24 2013, 19:50:29 UTC

I'm glad it moved you in that way, it's very humbling to hear; I think every writer strives for that sort of thing.

Thanks for taking the time to read! ^_^