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r_1_ss_a March 22 2012, 01:08:24 UTC
I KNEW ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!

I KNEW THIS WAS YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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astrangerenters March 22 2012, 17:55:44 UTC
...well that's because I heeeeavily hinted what I wrote about ;)

But thank you :)

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astrangerenters March 22 2012, 17:56:05 UTC
I think everyone needs an Ohno to push them in the right direction!

I love her too!

Thank you!

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astrangerenters March 22 2012, 17:56:39 UTC
I hope you'll feel better so you'll be able to wander around!! Tokyo is a great city :)

Thank you!

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poilouse March 22 2012, 10:20:22 UTC
This story is so cute ! Nino and Becky make such an adorable couple.

I laughed at this passage : "Don't call her!" Satoshi said, "it's more like a movie if your eyes meet across the room."
"This is a pretty damn big room, idiot!" Nino grumbled back" :D

Becky's frustration in front of Mona Lisa : Oh, I hear you. Extremely disappointing ! So many people in front of the painting, it's impossible to go near it, and it's smaller than expected.

It was interesting to read a story where these two are traveling in Paris for once ! (I am French and I live near Paris ^^). It also reminds me of the Nodame Cantabile movies.

Thank you ! :)

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astrangerenters March 22 2012, 17:57:50 UTC
I was just waiting for someone French to come in and yell at me about how many things I got wrong here, but you didn't! But really, do let me know if I was wrong ;)

I've obviously never been to the Louvre, but I just figured it wouldn't be the greatest experience because everyone wants to see it.

And I love Nodame Cantabile so much!!

Thank you!

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poilouse March 23 2012, 18:36:10 UTC
No, don't worry, you checked the places and transports well !

The only thing I spot is a tiny typo : you wrote Sacre Corue instead of Coeur. But in the rest of the text you wrote it correctly ;)

Well your description of the Louvre is exactly that. If I'm not mistaken, the painting of Mona Lisa is behind a glass and there is a rope preventing people from coming too close. But maybe it's not the case anymore, I've been many times to the Louvre but there are so many things to see that priorities have to be made, LOL. :D

Nodame Cantabile is love indeed ! Yet in the movies they made Nodame exit a metro station... and appear at the opposite place of where she should have been. As if we were told she was at the New York airport while she was obviously at the Chicago aiport. But the scenery they put was indeed prettier ;)

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mylittlecthulhu March 22 2012, 13:12:36 UTC
Absolutely in love with this! Never really thought of what Nino x Becky would be like, and this is just so funny and cute and sweet, and I think you've made me like Becky so much more than I thought I could ^^

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astrangerenters March 22 2012, 17:58:33 UTC
I hadn't written Nino/Becky before either, so I jumped at the opportunity because the combo of Nino's snark and Becky's optimism are so much fun!

Everyone should like Becky, I think!

Thank you!!

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