*FIC: After Ever (Doctor Who)*

[asterie_smiles]

After Ever
by asterie_smiles

Fandom: Doctor Who (new doctor)
Disclaimer: I don’t think I could fool anyone into thinking I had any rights to the Doctor and co if I tried.
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jack/Nine/Rose OT3
Summary: Why don’t you start at the beginning, with a man named Jack, and fill in the blanks? Think of it like a puzzle.
Beta: minnow_53, and thanks also to dk_faerie for

Comments

[g_shadowslayer]

I like this! (And obviously it's affected me because I made an interesting freudian slip typo the first time and said "I lick this"... hahahahaha)

[asterie_smiles]

lol, I don't know what I would've thought if I got the first version of this comment... ^_~ Thank you muchly; I'm glad you liked it, although I am quite concerned about the licking idea...

[g_shadowslayer]

It's Jack -- I can't help it :D

[kathianta]

Lovely! I really like the sense of disjointedness, I think it works really well. And the Jack<3's bit - very cute!

(Oddly enough, I wrote a fic based on fairy tales earlier. Weird coincidence! Although mine's nothing like yours!)

[asterie_smiles]

Thank you! Glad you liked it, especially the Jack &hearts part - I came up with it when I had no paper or pen, and wasn't sure it came out quite right.

Oooh, I love fairy-tale fics. Do you have a link?

[emony2]

That was great! Fantastic even. I loved the style.

Em

[asterie_smiles]

Thanks muchly; I'm glad you think the style worked! ^_^

[chicafrom3]

...yes. Many times yes.

This is astonishing. It's not like anything I've read before, and it's perfect, Jack in spades. It's a look at the OT3 that's just heartwrenching and awe-inspiring and the style suits it perfectly.

Then do the math. One princess, one Time Lord, and one dashing Captain walk into a bar. (Stop me if you’ve heard this one.) Add two double vodka-tonics to each, then another for good measure. Take away 20% of Rose’s inhibitions, 10% of Jack’s, and 0.001% of the Doctor’s; then go forth and multiply. Keeping up? So, if the Doctor pays with psychic paper that looks like £25 and gets £2.50 change, how many Daleks does it take to change a lightbulb? You think it adds up to a massive headache.

I love the whole thing from beginning to end, and it's going in my favorites list.

I'm sorry for the incoherency of this review, so I'll sum it up again in one word:

Yes.

[asterie_smiles]

Wow, thank you - I don't really know what to say to such an eloquent and flattering review (not incoherent in the least, although quite overwhelming!). I'm so glad you liked it, especially the maths part - I thought it might be too much like the Pizza Hut adverts (the ones that go something like, 'A family of four go into Pizza Hut, order x pizzas, each eat y slices, if dad pays with a tenner how many cheesy fingers does a meerkat have?'), but thought I'd go for it anyway; I'm pleased you think it worked. ^_^

So, anyway, I'm extremely flattered, especially your comment about it being 'Jack in spades': I was really worried about whether he came across okay, especially as this is my first DW fic.

...I might shut up now, so I'll leave it at thank you very much. ^_^

PS) Love the icon. ^_~

[nnwest]

My comment didn't show up the first time. Now it'll probably show up twice, but...

I liked this a lot. Kinda surreal. I like the stream of consciousness feel. Thanks for posting.

[nnwest]

I was right. Deleted the first one.

[asterie_smiles]

Thank you for commenting. ^_~ I'm very glad you liked it. ^_^