Ficcage:: Not the Fall

[astarvingwriter]

Title: Not the Fall
Fandom(s): Inuyasha
Ships: SessKag. Maybe.
Summary: It isn't the fall that kills you, they tell her jokingly. It's the landing.
Author's Plea: Oneshot, different style, present tense, short.. Goodness I can't warn you enough, but it's all I could do at present. Knowing me, I'll probably write another out of utter disappointment

Comments

[nelson_bannaba]

I have no idea what you were thinking, but it worked. The story was mysterious all the way through, and the best part of it was that the ending was better than the beginning. Or at least as good. The falling/landing theme was catchy and you wrapped it up in an way totally unexpected. Great last line. And I thought it was pretty romantic, myself.

That last line

[rebecca_nc]

That was a great last line but did you omit a she? Great story though. I love your work!