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WiP The Summer Al Tried to Live by asnowyowl. Chapter 6/10

Jul 18, 2009 08:42

I'm, what? About 9 hours late. *sigh*

Author: asnowyowl
Title: The Summer Al Began Tried to Live: Chapter 6
Pairing: Albus Severus/Scorpius
Summary: In the summer before college, Al Potter finally begins living, but can he find the courage to show his family who he really is? In this chapter: A lot of truth and more than a bit of daring.
Warnings: smexin ( Read more... )

person: gilderoy lockhart, place: tropics, quote: founder of buddism (cannot be hid, food: banana, emotion: waking/awake, freeform: in broad daylight, object: sun flowers, song: kc and the sunshine band

Comments 17

remuslives23 July 18 2009, 13:03:20 UTC

I swear that I have melted to the couch. The coming out to Harry was so emotional and I'm glad Harry reacted better than Al expected. So pissed off at James - you write him as a prick so well!

But the sexing -- oh, god. So very hot and so very sweet at the same time and I am dying from the combination. :) Fantastic chapter and I can't wait for next weeks.

asnowyowl July 20 2009, 15:30:01 UTC

Thanks, hun! It was a really hard chapter to write. Between the emotions and the first-time sex, it took a lot of time and mental energy. Hopefully this week, I'll come in on time.

brknhalo241 July 18 2009, 15:26:23 UTC

What an incredible chapter!! I loved Al's courage in coming out even when he wasn't sure what Harry would do or say. Harry is definitely in shock but I thought he handled it well. Better than James, at any rate. The scene with Corey was hot but what I liked most was the fact that Corey was patient through any fumblings and made Al feel beautiful, wanted and needed. Love this story!!

asnowyowl July 20 2009, 15:31:27 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story!

mysecretashes July 18 2009, 16:23:13 UTC

Amazing chapter! I love that Harry's reaction was realistic but still on the positive side. Maybe now he and Al can work on their relationship. I had expected James to be a prick about it, but I'm holding out hope that he'll eventually be ok with it.

The scene at Corey's house was hot and sweet and a bit awkward - just like first times should be. I loved how Corey was patient and didn't make Al feel embarrassed about fumbling a little. :)

asnowyowl July 20 2009, 15:32:38 UTC

Thanks! I really wanted to make Al's first time special, but still sweet and fumbling.

phys_nut July 18 2009, 17:54:57 UTC

oh thank god! *dances* i was afraid you weren't going to update this week, and i'm so happy you did!!
This chapter is wonderful, the coming out was brilliant, and i love that harry took it so well, and yeah james is an asshole, but i guess someone's gotta be! and george is brilliant, totally cool and accepting!

oh and merlin, the bedroom scene! *melts* it was perfect, so sweet and totally hot and just GAH! i simply cannot wait for the next chapter!! :D

asnowyowl July 20 2009, 15:34:27 UTC

Thanks! I hated to turn it in late this week, but this chapter was a harder one for me to write--between all the emotions of the coming out to the sex scene, it about burned my brain. LOL. I'm glad you liked George, I thought it would be a fun scene in between emotianlly charged ones.

teas_me July 19 2009, 00:05:07 UTC

I just read all six parts today and OMG this story is awesome! I love how Harry was just lost when it came to Al and how he was more accepting of Al being gay than what Al thought. James is a right bastard - and you've written him well. I love how Corey didn't tease Al during their first attempt at being really intimate.

This is such a great story and I'm looking forward to your next update :)

asnowyowl July 20 2009, 15:36:13 UTC

Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read all the chapters at once. Yeah, Harry didn't understand Al at all, but with the truth out, I think maybe it'll get easier for him.