fic: Gilded

[autumn_scarlett]

Title: Gilded
Word Count: 1,707
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: noncon, infidelity
Summary: He sank down the wall of the hallway… wallowing in his self-disgust, hating himself for his weakness.
Notes: Well, as hard as this is to admit, this is my first fanfic ever. Like… seriously, ever. And I hope that’s it’s not glaringly obvious, (so please, please, do not

Comments

[shadowess]

congrats on your first fic and kudos's for you posting it on a comm the first time out.
This was a nice dark fic, I liked the use of flashbacks to compel the story forward. I feel sad for Scorpius, and yet not.
Well done!

[autumn_scarlett]

thanks! i really appreciate you commenting, it makes me feel so much better.
c:

[lost_stray_cat]

It's quite well written, even if the content is not quite what I enjoy. :-) I am a romance, fluff, and happy endings type of girl. But this is a fine fic stylistically speaking. :-)

[autumn_scarlett]

i'm really glad you read it even though the content wasn't exactly your ideal. i appreciate the comment.

[asnowyowl]

Congratulations on your first fanfic! I always enjoy split-chronology fics--it's like uncovering a mystery little-by-little. But, I feel so bad for Al. *pets him*. Good job!

[autumn_scarlett]

thank you for the comment. i wasn't quite planning on doing flashbacks, but that part just kind of wrote itself, and i liked the end result.
^-^

[nolagal]

sad for Albus and Scorpius. Really well done!

[autumn_scarlett]

i'm happy that you liked it and thanks for leaving a comment; it made my day!

[rubyemerald_1]

Wow. That was dark. And a fab first fic. Well done. Write more.