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Fic: The Prize

Jun 11, 2009 08:32

Title: The Prize
Author: remuslives23
Rating: PG13
Word count: 1273

Prompts: Song One: 'Carnival' by The Cardigans; Song Two: 'Carnival' by Natalie Merchant; Freeform: Win or Lose; Emotion: Joy
Summary: Sometimes losers can be winners.
Notes: I hope the use of the songs was enough to count. I used 4 words from the Natalie Merchant song and a couple of lines of The ( Read more... )

song: cardigans, song: natalie merchant, freeform win or lose, emotion: joy

Comments 35

phoenix_xd June 10 2009, 23:21:07 UTC

oh, i adored this :D

remuslives23 June 11 2009, 04:20:35 UTC

Thanks, sweetie! *hugs you* I'm very happy you enjoyed it. :)

susan5124 June 10 2009, 23:21:35 UTC

Um Yeah. From the time Albus put his hands on Scorpius' hips to the moment Scorpius let go and kissed him I was a big pile of mush! I understand the frustration of, if I just do this or I just do that then that special someone will love me. But then to realize that the someone had been watching you and felt the same just turned me to goo. You never disappoint me!

remuslives23 June 11 2009, 04:23:08 UTC

Thanks, hon! *squishes you* I'm happy you liked it. I know that feeling of frustration so very well, but had a little trouble getting it into words. I'm pleased it managed to make sense. :)

Thanks for commenting, and I ADORE your icon! *giggles*

susan5124 June 11 2009, 06:03:37 UTC

HeHe Thanks! I was getting tired of not having one and so this afternoon I went in search of at least one. After I had gone to several websites my computer started running slow, so I started running a virus scan and realized I had picked up 2 viruses. So much for my anti-vius protection! Anyway, after the scan I managed to get rid of them and everything was fine. Shortly after that I found this lovely icon and I knew it worth the trouble and I had to have it. I'm glad you like it and feel free to use it. Just credit laurel_tx.

asnowyowl June 10 2009, 23:54:34 UTC

I loved this. And don't we all do silly things like that--if I pop that balloon, I'll get what I want. If I throw this penny into the thishing well...

I loved both the boys here. Great job, hun!

remuslives23 June 11 2009, 04:28:41 UTC

Yep. Sigh. I do silly things like that all the time - Scorpius is actually very much like me in this fic...I didn't realise I'd done that until I started responding to the comments here. :)

I'm pleased you enjoyed it, hon. Thanks for reading and commenting. *hugs*

nolagal June 11 2009, 02:48:10 UTC

Albus was so sexy in this. GUH!

remuslives23 June 11 2009, 04:30:20 UTC

Al is such a sexy beast. I'm warming up to an NC17 fic with these boys and Al is already wanting to bust out of PG13. *smacks him*

Thanks for commenting, hon! And I love your icon - so cute. :)

maevemist June 11 2009, 04:17:04 UTC

ngh. GUH. *flail*

This was pretty damned hot I gotta say. Just the thing for such a cold day. Sometimes it is the simple pleasures in life that beat out the hot and heavy smexin' by miles.

remuslives23 June 11 2009, 04:33:58 UTC

:) Thanks, sweetie! I agree - sometimes a sweet kiss can beat a quick shag, and I'm pleased you liked this one. These boys are so adorable and I'm still getting to know them. I had so much fun writing this fic - but I can't wait till they let me get them nekkid!

Thanks for commenting. *snuggles you*