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Jun 10, 2009 19:01

Title: Win-or-Lose
Word Count: too many! (2327)
Prompts: Place- Carnival/ Fair/ Amusement Park,
Object 1- Tunnel of Love,
Object 2- Ticket,
Food- Candy Floss,
Emotion- Joy,
Song one- "Carnival" The Cardigans,
Quote- "That's the way we are wired. It's the way we are wired. It sucks but its just a fact of nature. It's also tragic" Adventureland,
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object: ticket, object: tunnel of love, rating: pg-13, song: cardigans, food: cotton candy, freeform win or lose, emotion: joy, place: carnival, quote: adventureland (wired)

Comments 12

asnowyowl June 10 2009, 18:33:02 UTC

Awwww!! *flails* They're just so darn sweet. I liked the immediacy of the first person and present tense. And most of us have written Al as the unsure one and Scorp as the sex-god. Good to see the tables turned.

tree_faerie_me June 10 2009, 18:36:31 UTC

Hey thanks! It's always nice to try a little something different, right? :D

x

nolagal June 10 2009, 22:39:13 UTC

I'd be hanging out at the concession stand too! Very cute and sweet!

tree_faerie_me June 11 2009, 17:40:15 UTC

Muchos thanks!! :D
I'd probably be guilty of hanging out there too, complete with static floss and starstruck expression. ;)

phoenix_xd June 10 2009, 22:55:56 UTC

i think i was just as nervous as scopius was there xD

amazing!
:D

tree_faerie_me June 11 2009, 17:41:18 UTC

Eeee I'm glad! :D :D
I wasn't sure I'd be evoking many emotions 'cus I meg rushed it, so to hear this makes me happy :).

remuslives23 June 10 2009, 23:51:42 UTC

So sweet! I like insecure!Scorpius. :)

tree_faerie_me June 11 2009, 17:42:48 UTC

I actually meant for sulty!Scorpius to play a role, but I guess he's had enough :P
So out came quiet, insecure!Scorps for a little play :D...
I think I quite like him too.

maevemist June 11 2009, 03:47:59 UTC

OMG I loved your carnival! WWW + Carnival = pure brilliance!!! I can't stop grinning at the idea and I wish I could go there now.

I was also really impressed by your cast of OC. I know they are not really a pivotal part of your story or anything but I still liked them alot, porbably because of their names, I am weird like that sometimes.

tree_faerie_me June 11 2009, 17:37:58 UTC

Thank you! I wasn't certain about naming them, spent ages flipping through Simon (my dictionary) for a little inspiration :3
The whole AWWCoR came to me in a flash of magical creativity. It makes me sad though...I wish it exsisted too :P
Oh, and in my opinion, 'weird' is so important! Without 'weird', we wouldn't have half as much fun!
(The more you repeat the word 'weird' the weirder it looks O___O)