Comments | ass_carnival: FIC: So it goes, Albus Severus/Scorpius, PG

tray_la_la in ass_carnival

FIC: So it goes, Albus Severus/Scorpius, PG

Jun 09, 2009 21:23

Title: So it goes.
Author: tray_la_la
Pairing: Albus Severus/Scorpius
Word Count: 470
Rating: PG
Summary: James was the first to say it wouldn't work. Apparently, some things never do.
Warnings: Infidelity, stylistic oddity of dubious merit
Disclaimer: Not mine!
Prompts: All! But I'm about 80 words shy of the 10-prompt word limit. Please be forgiving. :) ( Read more... )

object: ticket, object: tunnel of love, song: cardigans, food: cotton candy, freeform win or lose, emotion: joy, place: carnival, person: james potter, song: natalie merchant, quote: adventureland (wired)

Comments 28

nuclearsugars June 10 2009, 01:48:07 UTC

YES, angsty AS/S carnival fic! I adore this and poor Al with his heart broken by Scorpius.

tray_la_la June 10 2009, 01:52:30 UTC

thank you, doll!!! *squishes*

mysecretashes June 10 2009, 01:54:52 UTC

*sniffles*

Poor Al!

I like the melodic style, btw. :)

tray_la_la June 10 2009, 01:57:42 UTC

yay! thank you!!! :D i quite like it myself, but i wasn't sure it would work outside my own head. :P

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tray_la_la June 10 2009, 02:06:25 UTC

*pets him* al's a tough one though, he'll survive. plus, this is just make believe. they are, of course, really together. *nods* :P

thanks for reading!

asnowyowl June 10 2009, 02:30:47 UTC

Oh! So sad. Very lyrically written. Great job (though you broke my heart right along with Al's)

tray_la_la June 10 2009, 02:33:28 UTC

i'm sorry! *mends it back together* but thank you so much!!! i'm so happy you liked the style. :D

nolagal June 10 2009, 03:28:01 UTC

Fabulous and sad!

tray_la_la June 10 2009, 03:34:39 UTC

thanks so much, hon!!!