Stasis - Michael
Title: Stasis
Author: Aspen Snow
Character: Michael
Rating: PG-13
Summary: In the past and the present, Michael watches two people die.
( He can't stop it... )
Author: Aspen Snow
Character: Michael
Rating: PG-13
Summary: In the past and the present, Michael watches two people die.
( He can't stop it... )
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"When?" he asked, "When are you going to live happily ever after?" == You didn't just actually write that did you? Really, profundity from a child... it all seems so simple, doesn't it?
He doesn't hear her cry anymore. == **gasp**
On opposite sides of the glass they both sit in chairs- restrained and powerless. The parallel scares him. == Such a beautiful observation. You're making me anxious about tonight's ep.
He repeated the number in his head over and over again so he wouldn't forget it while he watied for the machine to start again. == There's so much to be said about this one... where to begin?
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