FIC: Child of Flames and Winter (Theon/Sansa) for thepiratequeen

[redcandle17]

Recipient: thepiratequeen
Title: Child of Flames and Winter
Author: perchRating: PG

Comments

[subterrain]

I think you did a great job with characterization, how Sansa would see Theon and how he doesn't quite know how to seperate or conjoin his interest in her from his interest in whores, so he just mocks her instead.

[etrangere]

that is such a delightful story, so subtle and almost sweet but also sharp. Brillant characterization.

[lodessa]

I love how both Sansa and Theon are locked into such idealized pictures of themselves. He sees himself as dangerous and "bad" though he is not so tough and Sansa thinks of herself as some fated maiden, although she's just a silly little girl.

[thepiratequeen]

Thank you so much for this. It was beautifully in character and showed their flaws and also in a way how fitted for each other that might make them.

[mercy]

Well, like I told you before that the "idea" of this pairing at this age was creepy to me.

Yet, you pulled this off. I like how you kept them both in character, which added to the weirdness for me and yet, I could see it. I could see Sansa looking at the only attractive non-relative young man near her for her first crush. I could see her innocence charming Theon. I could see him disturbed by his own reaction to her.

Dude, the prostitute! The eyes and hair! I actually gasped and laughed out loud.

You rule. *bows to your writing skills*