I am so happy that someone chose this prompt and you've done a wonderful job with it. I love how pragmatic and sensible Alayaya is and how much we glimpse of her world even within the short space of the story. She's such a fascinating perspective to explore, and I really like her wry observations of how clueless people in Westeros are. And the ending is wonderful.
Alayaya comes across as strong, sensible and practical. Chataya, despite being the madam of a brothel, comes across as a loving and caring mother. Would love to read her backstory...and that of Jalabhar Xho. Why would they come so far, to Westeros?
This is fantastic, a POV that we will never get in the books. I love how you've drawn Chataya and Alayaya's characters here; they're very vivid, and we get a sense of who they are with just one fic.
What a lovely story. It is such fun to spend time with the character you have created here and see through her eyes. It makes me miss her character on the GoT TV show even more. Fantastic job. If you are even inspired to write more about this character, please don't hesitate!
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As I`m a dedicated teacher, I really enjoy the ending :)
Thank you for sharing!
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